forest terrain

[dragonslarger]

This is my first adtempt to make a waterfall.It was created useing the ultimate terraining map.
feel free to give advice!
(the pics called terrain2 because its my 2nd terrain but first waterfall one)

 

[Dr. House]

Doesn´t look that bad but you might wana look at a few things which are:

1: The lordearon grass you used doesn't really fit in my opinion you might wana search for a different one

2: at the waterfall the rocks you used you might wana make them envirorment doodads and make more of them to make the waterfall look more realistic (sorry dont know how to explain this in a better way my english isnt what i call perfect)

3: perhaps change the atmosphere to night since it would give a better feeling imo (you might want to change the sky as well

4: the tree near the waterfall some leaves are infront of the waterfall when the tree stands basicly behind it somhow this looks wrong in my eyes but its just a small thing.

5: you might wana work more on terrain height cause the front looks very flat imo

6: the rocks you used near the river do not fit with the terrain you might wana use ashenvale rocks imo.

Well thats basicly it i hope that any of this didnt sound rude and i hope that som of it can help you improve your terrain.

 

[dragonslarger]

thxs and none of it was quote:Well thats basicly it i hope that any of this didnt sound rude and i hope that som of it can help you improve your terrain. answer: its not rude its apriciated and it help me to understand terrraining more so thxs!!!

 

[Adiktuz]

a few color variation won't hurt... ^_^