Ashenvale River Forest

[lnfernal]

My first submitted map, Don't be so mean

Could post the picture with URL.. So I just post the link

 

[Belgarath]

OMG THAT SUKS KIK, Jk

It's a nice start, but game camera angles are bad. Otherwise, I'd just go in a bit left and down, add some shrubs and flowers and other things.

 

[lnfernal]

Shrubs and Flowers and Angle.

I'll think about that, about the Shrubs, I couldn't find any good, they all were too bright and the darker ones.. My grass made them "invisible"

 

[Nudl9]

Download hives ultimate terraining map!

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

It is ok,but you should start working with better models.Download the Ultimate Terraining Map and you will find exactly what you need.Then you would be able to make much better terrains.

 

[lnfernal]

That was actually what I used.

 

[Gilles]

Good tile variation. Not too bad for a waterfall. You need to work on the environment now. Plants, better trees, and rocks.

 

[~Void~]

OMG THAT SUKS KIK, Jk

It's a nice start, but game camera angles are bad. Otherwise, I'd just go in a bit left and down, add some shrubs and flowers and other things.

Well yeah, but it's a game camera. You can't play the game with your camera down low.

 

[Gilles]

You can scroll. It's limited, but it might be better.

 

[~Void~]

Wait, you used the Ultimate Terraining Map and blizzard trees? LOL you are the first person I have seen to do that! But now I recognize some of the bushes you used... lol!!! xD

 

[Troubadour]

It's pretty good, but really waterfalls don't usually tumble down over dirt or whatever, you should put some rocks in and around the waterfall to make it look more realistic. Also add some forest life (flowers, shrubs etc.) and maybe some river rushes.

you used the Ultimate Terraining Map and blizzard trees?

I believe those are the modified bliz trees in UTM.

 

[Craka_J]

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~Craka_J

 

[Gilles]

There's a link Craka_J. And it loads fine for me.

[off-topic]Glad to see you posting. Although you posted on old stuff.[/off-topic]

 

[Craka_J]

Ah now I see. Thanks for the welcome back btw.

The terrain is pretty good. Not great though. I like the terrain, but the water sticks out too much. Adding a fog which blends with everything (Terrain, water, doodads, units, etc.) will hide the obviousness of the waterfall/river/stream which will, in this case, be a good thing.

Overall, for a first terrain, this is very good. Some minor fixes needed, but nothing major, really. Good work and keep it up!

~Craka_J

 

[Hawkwing]

You need to add some plants and use UTM tree models ONLY. The water looks pretty good and the Blademaster's base is a neat touch.

I noticed the tent and said,"oh this must be UTM", then I saw the trees and went. "WTF?"

But nice first try!

 

[ghenjis]

You need to add some plants and use UTM tree models ONLY.

I wouldn't say that. There a lot of viable tree models out there. The UTM just makes it easy to access a lot of the good ones.
As for the terrain, if though it has a game camera, it has a good atmosphere, better than a lot of beginner terrains. The right side of the waterfall also looks too flat. Even so, kudos on a job well done for a starting terrain. Keep practicing. =)