Arch Angel Seraphim

[Moderator]

10:37, 31st May 2008
HappyTauren: Some animations show her walking, and some show her floating. So, it could use few touchups, and maybe get wings animated, but, other than that, it is very nicely edited model.

 

[LiOneSS]

*_* wonderful model and great name ^__________^

 

[Grievous1]

looks great nice angel warrior model with funny wing shoes good work 5/5

 

[kuanish]

great model.

 

[Mamma_Pappa]

Very good!
+rep

 

[Amigurumi]

Nice model, but the wings on the big shoes look a little bit odd

But good job 4.5/5

 

[Devine]

nice work... the lionface on the boots look bad ... to stretched
anyway
4/5

 

[arthasdeath]

why are u always quarriling with lioness XD?

 

[General Frank]

why are u always quarriling with lioness XD?

Always ? I must admit she's can be a nice girl, but wha do you think I have always something to do with her ? It's the first time, I name something like her.

 

[Karouk]

Really nice model to go with your other angel. Though... the face... I just don't like it, she looks all... Shocked in horror... 4/5

 

[plaid_man]

wicked...i love it it is so sick i will use in my map when i resume it!

 

[XS-Archangel]

wonderful and unique and recognizable style of GF
Holy race on it's way

 

[Kuhneghetz]

Awesome!
Though I have critiques on the portrait model.
In talk animation, her chin makes an odd elastic movement and the lips moves like if she is going to give you hundreds of smooches.

 

[General Frank]

Awesome!
Though I have critiques on the portrait model.
In talk animation, her chin makes an odd elastic movement and the lips moves like if she is going to give you hundreds of smooches.

Oh, really ? I haven't noticed that flaw in portrait model. I will indeed, update it as soon as possible.

 

[emperor_d3st]

Nice one. I see some influence from the game 'Sacred'
I think the boots look okay ingame.

 

[Malvodion]

She looks like the Sacred's Seraphim

 

[WolfmanArc]

Looking good General.... nice model.

 

[General Frank]

She looks like the Sacred's Seraphim

Yeah, indeed I was my intention.

 

[Just_Spectating]

why is this unapproved?

 

[A.R.]

Awesome things:
- I really love the shine on the sword, looks great.
- Sacred <3
- nice use of textures, models. looks badass all round.

Things that need improvement:
- proportions are a bit blocky and her chest/shoulders are too broad (as I've outlined in the paintover)
- portrait anims need work, as has been mentioned. If you look at it from the side during the talk anim... its not pretty.

also, try the parts that use white.blp as teamcolour, just a suggestion

 

[TheDivineBoss]

What next? A brad.dude03 Tauren Kodorider?

And why does she got four wings?

 

[shaun]

her boobs are to small

 

[General Frank]

What next? A brad.dude03 Tauren Kodorider?

And why does she got four wings?

No, a divineboss flame tank

 

[lightning might]

her wing could be bigger,otherwise great model 4/5

 

[K0Rn3]

Looks very nice, but the Swords is a bit small.

 

[General Frank]

Looks very nice, but the Swords is a bit small.

It's longer ingame.

 

[arthasdeath]

i saw u quarrilied with her in chat once remember? who is she anyway ur girlfriend?

 

[General Frank]

i saw u quarrilied with her in chat once remember? who is she anyway ur girlfriend?

Quarrilied ? What the hell is that ? What ever it'S used to be, she not my girlfriend. And dude, work on your language, it's gross, and stop to spam okay ?

 

[Just_Spectating]

^ Lol..

What skin did you use?

 

[General Frank]

^ Lol..

What skin did you use?

Look it up youself. Just click 'Click here to display advanced details.'

 

[Just_Spectating]

oh i c, didnt know that was ther.

 

[TheDivineBoss]

No, a divineboss flame tank

Yay, can't wait!


^{/sarcasm, sproing.}

 

[Blackscar]

Why is this model stil in pending status?
Edit
-Never mind

 

[arthasdeath]

Quarrilied ? What the hell is that ? What ever it'S used to be, she not my girlfriend. And dude, work on your language, it's gross, and stop to spam okay ?

i think its u who has to get better english general. quarriling is to "fight with words". i learned that in 4th grade and im norwegian-.- also i just replied ur reply so dont call it spam

 

[General Frank]

i think its u who has to get better english general. quarriling is to "fight with words". i learned that in 4th grade and im norwegian-.- also i just replied ur reply so dont call it spam

I don't know this word, honest. Sorry, if my comment about your language was bad, but I really don't like to see rather intelligent people use bad improper language.

 

[TheDivineBoss]

i think its u who has to get better english general Frank. quarriling is to "fight with words". i learned that in 4th grade and im norwegian-.- also i just replied ur reply so dont call it spam.

Sir.

Somebody get Google Translate, quick!

 

[A.R.]

He means quarrelling. It means arguing

 

[Xendarc]

ok... first of all
Stop arguing!
second
It's a very nice model but I have one problem with it.
this is just personal liking
the sholders and chest are to manly, they stick out and are to thick (and yes... im aware that she has massive pauldrons but she still has sholders under them)
just constructive crit. so dont slog me for it.

 

[Velmarshal]

Do a Gladiator, with Dalamar's set, next. And what does the Seraphim mean?

 

[HappyTauren]

http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&...:en-US:official&hs=yXQ&q=seraphim&btnG=Search

 

[Velmarshal]

http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&...:en-US:official&hs=yXQ&q=seraphim&btnG=Search

Oh, Thanks.

 

[HiTch]

Why not try to make her armor thinner. Making her a "bit" sexy i pressume.

 

[Csicska]

@Arthasdeath

The General has still far better english than you... and anyway, first get a girlfriend for yourself, and just then start thinking about others'. Lol.

By the way I wanted to mention, that this is a very nice model. Reminds me of Sacred too (And yeah, her boobs are too small for a blond-superhuman-angel-lady-stuff model. Really. =P )

 

[TheDivineBoss]

Now that you mentioned it..


GF, try a cup C-D, not a B, please.

 

[General Frank]

Now that you mentioned it..


GF, try a cup C-D, not a B, please.

C is one hand full. D look pleased but is too much.

 

[Duckyquack]

Cool, immense. Just HAVE to use in my new map. 100/10!

 

[punwisp]

great model! just needs a longer sword!

 

[DroZzhat]

Huh. It's well put together, as in... I can't detect any flaws, or anything technically wrong with it. But I have to say the model just looks strange all around... Weird legs, what's she wearing anyways? Also, I mean even take it from just the picture uploaded here, she looks like she's straddling something... Maybe a skirt might help with that problem. Either that, or I'm insane. I'm guessing it's just a result of the animation set..?

All well. I love almost all of your stuff, General Frank. I'm sure this is a great model too, but this isn't doing anything for me.

Oh and, is it me, or is her face a bit tall/long? Or was that intentional?

4/5

[edit]

Gah, typo...

 

[TheDivineBoss]

Unlike other modelers, GF puts head A on body B with C-legs and B-arms and then reskins it.

Nudge nudge.