Arch-Acolyte

[Moderator]

Misha 15th Aug 2013

Moderator's Review: Okay, so.. since now your model has sleeves, you might want to remove the upper part of his arm that is inside the sleeves, because the arm now clips through the sleeve in 'stand 3' animation. you should also try to shorten what's left of the arm at the 'elbows' so that it doesn't poke, or, just remove entire arms, leaving just the hands with the sleeves. you should totally change the blue particles in the attack to something that'll suit the green particles, or, to remove those totally, and put something like big runes on his arms, that show only when he's attacking (that might need billboarding so, note me if you want to add such) also you should remove the lich texture and replace it with acolyte's (maybe with TC so you can maybe fit it with the part of the skirt that already got acolyte tex)

and lastly, you might try that funky acolyte texture (it's in war3x mpq under 'Units\Other\DalaranReject\DalaranRejectAcolyte.blp) but i dunno if you might like it. it's pretty funky

Okay, I can approve this. but don't let that stop you from tweaking it further (mainly the edge of the skirt) and making it better as you learn

 

[Misha]

hm.. why did you upload a new model when you could've updated the one i've already moderated?

this kinda defeats the moderation :/

 

[Kyrbi0]

This is better... But yeah, just modify your existing upload in the future.

 

[CfWolfy]

Nice One! but edit the Face more.....better textures or somenthing special....5/5

 

[takakenji]

alot better

 

[Chinses player]

An different lich

 

[sonofjay]

Looks sweet.

 

[DeuceGorgon]

model

hm.. why did you upload a new model when you could've updated the one i've already moderated?

this kinda defeats the moderation :/

1. sry bbut i'm deleted old and i'm forgot on him

 

[Adaethus]

Meh, textures are still mostly the same and so is the model, I see you fixed the hole that was between the torso and the robes, which is good.
I still think you could use better and more unique textures for this, there's also a bad transition near the bottom of the robes where it turns teamcoloured.

 

[General Frank]

Meh, textures are still mostly the same and so is the model, I see you fixed the hole that was between the torso and the robes, which is good.
I still think you could use better and more unique textures for this, there's also a bad transition near the bottom of the robes where it turns teamcoloured.

Totally agree on the most part.
I think you might want to use the funky 'hidden' acolyte skin.

 

[Misha]

1. sorry but i deleted old and i forgot about him

that too is something you shouldn't do
deleting what's already moderated creates some confusion and maybe tiny bit of irk as the mod would need to re-moderate the model

anyway, keep tinkering and maybe try using that 'funky' texture mentioned

 

[DeuceGorgon]

Misha so sorry really.

I will only uploading one model always, and when will under moderate so i update it and no upload again. So sorry really.

 

[Misha]

that is okay you can upload any number of models, just keep in mind the thingie about updating

 

[DeuceGorgon]

FF

that is okay you can upload any number of models, just keep in mind the thingie about updating

And why still pending?

 

[Vinz]

Patience. By the way, that model is really malnourished. It's too skinny. Kindly reposition some vertices if you want to.

 

[CRIS]

nice job, we made an good model together 5/5

 

[DeuceGorgon]

malnourished?

This is my favourite model, acolyte, Old acolyte is too malnourished
but his body is hidden under robe.

 

[Vinz]

But that robe is pretty thin it looks like a stickman IMO.

 

[InfernalTater]

He's a fucking religious zealot, willingly enslaved to work for the undead. Do you really expect him to be packing the pork?

Anyway, 4/5.

 

[Mgeterno11]

Nice and cool model, perfect for the undead race. 5/5

 

[animewidri2]

I love it!!!!!

 

[Legeon]

An elite acolyte worker, nice .