The first sentence fits well. After that you should put some mini-info about the map (just some bits, like: This map is a unique survival map for the [hardcore fans] of Survival Maps; or: Here's a quick tutorial for the beginners/starting players; or any other messages you want to say)
First, let's start off with the basic items and stuffs. In this game, you can only carry [only] 1 type of each items (boots, weapons, and armors)*, so it's better to drop the weak items that you're currently carrying if you have [happen] found [to find] a better one.
There are chests hidden somewhere throughout in the map, locate them and you'll become overpower receive a powerup [or an upgrade]. Also,
When the game starts, you need to gather items at this stash. The faster you move, the more items you will get.
Lastly Some final things to remember: there are traps and puzzles that you need to overcome and solvejust to get the reward chest hidden in it. Kill other castaways, for the last one standing will be rewarded by the governor. Good luck!
*you can carry only 1 item in each item type.
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Optimized one:
First, let's start off with the basics. In this game, you can carry only 1 item in each item type (boots, weapons, and armors), so it's better to drop the weak items that you're currently carrying if you happen to find a better one.
There are chests hidden throughout in the map, locate them and you'll receive a powerup. When the game starts, you need to gather items at the stash given. The faster you move out, the more items you will get.
Some final things to remember: there are traps and puzzles that you need to overcome and solve to get the hidden reward chest. Kill other castaways, for the last one standing will be rewarded by the governor. Good luck!
I was a bit free, I think. XD
If you're in a rush, just read the optimized one, otherwise read the hidden texts, it can show you your mistakes and suggestions for better wordings. You're welcome! I will be busy now, so don't hope I'll be here until evening. Good luck with your map!