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  • I am awesome, when see you in my profile haha!

    ,,Current Activity: Private Messaging" Oh someone has been busy :cgrin:
    Thanks. :)

    I just noticed, we're almost the same age! I'm just a few days older than you. I'll be 14 tomorrow. :D
    The first sentence fits well. After that you should put some mini-info about the map (just some bits, like: This map is a unique survival map for the [hardcore fans] of Survival Maps; or: Here's a quick tutorial for the beginners/starting players; or any other messages you want to say)

    First, let's start off with the basic items and stuffs. In this game, you can only carry [only] 1 type of each items (boots, weapons, and armors)*, so it's better to drop the weak items that you're currently carrying if you have [happen] found [to find] a better one.


    There are chests hidden somewhere throughout in the map, locate them and you'll become overpower receive a powerup [or an upgrade]. Also,
    When the game starts, you need to gather items at this stash. The faster you move, the more items you will get.

    Lastly Some final things to remember: there are traps and puzzles that you need to overcome and solvejust to get the reward chest hidden in it. Kill other castaways, for the last one standing will be rewarded by the governor. Good luck!

    *you can carry only 1 item in each item type.
    better
    remove
    suggestion
    too vague

    Optimized one:
    First, let's start off with the basics. In this game, you can carry only 1 item in each item type (boots, weapons, and armors), so it's better to drop the weak items that you're currently carrying if you happen to find a better one.

    There are chests hidden throughout in the map, locate them and you'll receive a powerup. When the game starts, you need to gather items at the stash given. The faster you move out, the more items you will get.

    Some final things to remember: there are traps and puzzles that you need to overcome and solve to get the hidden reward chest. Kill other castaways, for the last one standing will be rewarded by the governor. Good luck!

    I was a bit free, I think. XD
    If you're in a rush, just read the optimized one, otherwise read the hidden texts, it can show you your mistakes and suggestions for better wordings. You're welcome! I will be busy now, so don't hope I'll be here until evening. Good luck with your map! :)
    I just want to ask some questions:

    What is this for?
    a. The message for starting in the game. (like, the map starts then this msg appears)
    b. For map description.
    c. For Quest Info
    I'll look into it.
    I may just point out the wrongs here and there or gibe better wordings (to the best of my ability), so I won't probably write the whole thing again.
    Is this a whole story or just a part? If it's a whole story, pardon me, but I'm pretty much occupied. If it's the latter, I may take a look at it and see what I can do.
    notification notification notification notification notification notification all daaaaay TODAAAAAAAAAAAAAY I WILL GET 535666667U67737346346342346364634 NOTIFICAAAAAAATIONS!!!!!!!1111111!!!!! Behyuthifhul shong.
    Just watched all of the MLP episodes.. :( They are up to Season 3, Episode 13. Right?
    Can't wait for Season 4 (which will probably come somewhere around October, as i read).
    MLP is really epic and awesome. :3
    I want to apologize, my Net is disconnected so we can't continue for today :S
    I am sending this message from my Ipad.

    Can we continue tomorrow?
    WHY YOU THREE DAVID AND ALMIA SPAMMING ME WITH THE DAFUQ!!??? AND ITS A SIGN OR respect...lol.
    at first I thought it was a hoax but then the japs actually made there version called "Tomodachi wa Mahou" lol I like rarity's voice :p
    I am looking forward to see your project, good luck with it, mate. :cgrin. You do not have to hurry with my map it is good if you finish it only by june. :)
    Lul, I got an exam, so I can't play (forgot to told you earlier), my brother will play my Garena acc for now
    Hi Optimizer, maybe you should change your Hive name to PonyImmortal (Credit to AwzomeWulfzz) xD
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