Ah, you are improving.
What you linked, are great foundations, however each of them will need defined objects that catch someone's eye. Currently, they are random effects.
The purple ray of light offers room for various ideas. Create something that's unique, though. (Adding crisp particles would basically result in a recoloured Breath of Frost; adding a hand would make this very similar to the human Devotion Aura --> create a different object or gesture in this case, and you'd have your icon.)
Your Starfall version needs actual meteorites.
The yellow glow could be some sort of holy fireworks.
As you can see, you have plenty of ways to go from here. Be creative, and enjoy the process.