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"We are there" Antonio says
"Men this place looks so... METALIC" Kyrkow says
"I know right" Mania says looking at antonio, Rheiko and Kyrkow
"Here antonio, power for you" Mania touches antonio and gives him strenght back "Now I have few time, here" Mania put's her hands in Kyrkow and Rheiko's heads "With this you shall have more power, and serve me!" Mania says
"For the metal!!!" Kyrkow says and rush towards the room where Am'ar and the others are
"What exactly did you put in his mind?" Rheiko asks
"He now thinks that if we loose, metal will die" Mania smiles
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Alright, I think you missed my post completely. It said, that Am'ar, Chen, Valentino and Leila entered a room where you guys were already. Not the other way around. You were in the room first - and you never left the room with Mania in it. It is the same room. We are all in the same room now, except for Cupid, who is trapped alone.
Anyways, I also wrote in my post, that you were singing a song when we entered the room, and by the end of my post I wrote that you were about to fight Leila.
Also, note from my post before that - the one with vKael and Bern, I wrote some plans with Leila and Kyrkow. That they each represent one side from Paillan, Leila being his angelic side, and Kyrkow being his demonic side, but none of them know of this. Anyways, as time goes, Leila will be even more angelic, and Kyrkow will be even more demonic - so that in the end Leila can't even turn into a succubus form anymore, but has instead gained powerful powers of the light, while Kyrkow is the opposite, powerful demonic powers with his guitar, but no sense of goodness at all.
Anyways, I'd like you to take what I wrote above into account, and then change your post, so that it matches the one I made before you. Thanks in advance
An idea how to do that, however, would be like this:
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"We are there" Antonio said, and spread out his arms. They stood in a large dark hall, with snake decorations everywhere.
"Man, this place looks so... METALLIC" Kyrkow exclaimed amazed.
"I know, right?" Mania's voice suddenly said, while she looked at Antonio, Rheiko and Kyrkow.
"Here Antonio, power for you" Mania touches Antonio and gives him his strength back.
"I also have some for you.. here you go!" Mania puts her hands on the foreheads of Kyrkow and Rheiko.
"With this you shall have more power, and serve me unquestioned!" Mania said.
"For the metal!!!" Kyrkow exclaimed and rushed towards a stage that suddenly appeared in the side of the room. Then he started playing a death metallic symphony on his electric guitar.
"What exactly did you put in his mind?" Antonio asked his Goddess.
"He now believes that should we loose, metal music will die" Mania replied, smiled, and went on to continue her ritual with Psyche.
A skull-looking microphone then appeared in front of Kyrkow, and he started sing into it
"HERE COMES THE SYMPHONY OF LOVE AND INSAAANIITY!!
THE MYSTERY OF ETEEEERNIITY, FUCKING DEEESTIINY!! YEAH!!"
At the same time entered Cupid's attack force. He knew none of them, but they should not be allowed to destroy metal music, he thought angrily. Suddenly the microphone flied to Antonio who welcomed the intruders.
Then, they all prepared for battle, and a small angelic girl would seemingly be Kyrkow's opponent. What an easy match, he thought confidently to himself, while still playing notes on his guitar...
Then she attacked!
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