Fantaisy World

[Mr.Goblin]

I allways dreamed about a world.. with magic creatures... and here you can see what's in those dreams...

1.Winter Night...
2.To The End Of The World...
3.Hidden Forest
4.One day I meet a friend...
5.Incomming

 

[~Void~]

I like how you use fog there. I don't like the road, however. It's sloped too far down and looks more like a ditch, but with snow, you wouldn't be able to see ditches pronounced like that because they would be filled with snowdrifts. Also, those footprints are highly unrealistic. A footprint in snow wouldn't go down to the dirt, it would just make an impression in the snow. Use a different snow tile that is further to the left on the list of tiles than the base one, and it will look like a hole in the snow.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

K i understand your point for the road.. i will simply remove it... but i don't understand your point for the footprint i don't know what your talking about.. (where do you see it?) but anyway thanks ^^

 

[~Void~]

Those ugly brown spots in the middle of the road.

 

[thedeathunterxx]

omfg !! the first one is scary azzz fuck! Your dreams are like nightmares

lol j/k... thatz just an awsome pic... +rep.


i dont know watz happening in tha first on though...

 

[Mr.Goblin]

i think the second one is ugly compared to the first one >< i should redo it.. or just remove it.. :X

well the story of the first one... is = i'm walking in the forest.. and than i hear a wierd big troat song.. and i look up.. and i see this BIG creatures... that i only see his glowing eyes.. and i see him looking at me.. and turns back.. and walk away.. before i can even realise that if it was a dream... and the only thing i could remember in this dream is that exact momment..

 

[thedeathunterxx]

yoo thatz just freakin wierd... and awsome at tha same time

i cant keep my eyez off of that SS :O

 

[NinjasDontFight]

i think the second one is ugly compared to the first one >< i should redo it.. or just remove it.. :X

I agree





Ever had one where your swimming like 2000ft underwater, in these huge caverns. With a large fish trying to eat you?

 

[Mr.Goblin]

i did... i one dream that i was swiming under the water at my lake... and that you see This BIG MOUTH AND GLOWING EYES COMING AT ME.... i think i pee in my bed that time (joke) well i might try to make this thanks for the idea..

Edit = is that better Void?

 

[raid1000]

i like the ancient in the first pick
+rep

 

[~Void~]

Yeah the glows on the second one look terrible, and the closeup on that tree above the camera is shitty too. There are a lot of stretched textures. The height variation is still too... colorful. It should be flatter or steeper and more defined with rocky cliffs.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

and what about my edit of the first one?

 

[Celaquil]

That first one is simply... Epic.
I dont know, the terrain is decent, but that titan or creature or whatever its suppost to be looking down on him really gives me a creepy/tingeling feeling of epicness Good job!

 

[raid1000]

lol i thought mediw was a tree stomp xD

 

[~Void~]

i did... i one dream that i was swiming under the water at my lake... and that you see This BIG MOUTH AND GLOWING EYES COMING AT ME.... i think i pee in my bed that time (joke) well i might try to make this thanks for the idea..

Edit = is that better Void?

There is still one ugly patch. Also, you should get some ice tiles or different snow tiles to mix it up a bit. And smooth the road more.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

oky ^^

 

[Kohuded]

Wow!
I like the darkness.
Those are great!

(Reminds me of Narnia.)

 

[Mr.Goblin]

Update! i removed the Pool of tranquility for THE END OF THE WORLD!

 

[FamousPker49]

The second one looks really bad, because you can see the bottoms of the ice spires.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

ah your right.. thanks.. will fix that later..

 

[pac168]

for some reason i fell in love with the second one

 

[Mr.Goblin]

k so for each picture here are the things i should fix .. i think

1 = Winter Night...
1# The smootnes of the relief
2# the a tileset change..

2 = To the end of the world...
1# the end of the Glacier
2# the glowing lights on the water (at some place they do squares)
3# the water transparenxy (on the left)
4# there are some lines on the water
5# Work abit on the glow

These are the things i tink i should work one.. Void of Famouspeaker if you find something else.. tell me..

 

[FrIkY]

Looks... neat! Nice terrains

 

[thedeathunterxx]

the first one is perfect...
the deep decents add to the mythical dream affect...
and the tileset is good when itz just snow...

instead add a few rocks ( frozen High rez) and some submerged shrubs ( blue ) but dont spam them.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

well for the snow i'm on your side.. and for the rocks (not really) cause during winter we only see big rocks.. and thats all.. so meeh.. and as you can see (i hope) the snow is at medivh boots.. so the snow is pretty high... so the only thing i will fix (when school will let me to ) is the smoothness of the relief.. and thats all..

Edit : how can i do a degraded text.. like frostwisper used for a week or 2 ? metal colored text? cause i want to use it for the description of my gallery

 

[Mr.Goblin]

*Bump* well i have fix the Winter Night one .. any more things i should change? Btw the To the end of the world one (fixed is coming)

Edit: ok.. here's my second try on the TO THE END OF THE WORLD .. now i need your comments! :S

btw i don't know how to get rid of the Lines on the water that the WATER doodad makes.. ><

 

[Hawkwing]

Awesome, but the mist in the water makes it look odd.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

meeh i wanted the glow to represents the soul of the dead of this cursed place..

 

[Belgarath]

Uhhh, what's on the left? It looks ... weird, black. If you want souls, get the green banshees and tint them black .

 

[Mr.Goblin]

hum i do like your banshe ideas

but are are you talkin about? about the black thing on the left?

 

[Hawkwing]

I think it's a rock. It just looks really weird because of the elevation of the icy spire.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

okay is that better?!

 

[Priest233]

The first one is kinda epic real like that monster +rep

 

[Gilles]

I don't like the glows.

 

[Childeric]

The one with the ship makes me think of Pirates 3. Aweesome job bro!

 

[SILLYbear]

the glacial pic makes a strong "oooooooo" impression.

but the spiky rocks a a bit too... upright. try figure out how those things form then form them up naturally.
if the crevice is supposed to be underground, make some snowy rocks arch over and make stalactites; if it isn't make some light creep from above to make it look "deep".

 

[Mr.Goblin]

well i took my idea from Simbad .. or Pirates of the Carabeans.. (they have the same place in the movie) and its not suppose to be .. in a cave.. just a crack in a REALLY REALLY BIG glacier.. like so big.. you can't see the sky over you but anyway.. will work more on it...

btw.. love the new update of the Winter Night?

 

[thedeathunterxx]

i think both look awsome..

the second one is nice. but there are a few problems.
like the spire to your far right, you can see that its floating off the ground.
maybe add more spires, each having an even less Z than the last, so that the bottoms get covered.

and no itz not a cave , duuh

 

[Mr.Goblin]

k thanks for the tips..

i'm trying to finish those maps.. before starting a new one.. cause it takes alot of places for nothing in my computer if i keep all my ''picture'' terrains..

 

[~Void~]

testing

By the way, that ship one is fucking amazing. You just need to fix the rocks on the sides, some of them stick out at the bases. :/

 

[Mr.Goblin]

Thanks, and I have no idea if i still have the map D:

Edit = NEW TERRAIN!

 

[Megafyr]

Nice terrains. +rep : >

 

[Dr. House]

The one with the ship makes me think of Pirates 3. Aweesome job bro!

XD made me also think of that