KKRP's Terrain

KKRP · Sep 23, 2007

Here are a few terrains I made, hope you like them.

City of Loyket

The Bleak Eternity of Gehenna

Ruined Metropolis

Graveyard of Ships

Centaurs in the Forest

Mountain Village

Undersea Ruins

Anduin Lothar, Lion of Stormwind

Kel'Thuzad, Conquerer of the Plaguelands

The Ruined Ship

Captured City

Army of Chaos Undivided

Island Paradise

Dwarven Mine

Island of the Pirate Hunter

ragingspeedhorn · Sep 23, 2007

Most of these shots are very plain and some of your tile usage seems odd. Like the lava in the front of the "The Bleak Eternity of Gehenna" picture. It doesn't fit at all and ruins the overall impresion of the work which is my favorite if not for that lava mistake.

Also you need to use lower/raise better, most of your pieces are very plain.

Overall your best shots are probably the underwater ones and the worst is the forrest ones as they all seem to just end with an white background like it was the end of the world.

KKRP · Sep 23, 2007

Yeah, I don't like the forest ones myself that much. I know what you mean about the white background it is really bad in the second forest one. Added a couple more, one is a ship crashed into a marsh, one is a witch doctor's hidden lab, one is the outside of a captured city, one is of an army of chaos, one is an island paradise, and the last one is a dark dwarven mine.

ragingspeedhorn · Sep 23, 2007

The Ruined Ship is far beyond any of your other work. 10 times better, I really like how it looks. +rep.

Only negative thing is those murlocs, ugly models.

The rest of the screenshots are rather mediocre, especially that Witch Doctor's Lab.

The Arrmy of Chaos Undivided has potential but you need to give more tile variation and perhaps something "more".

Craka_J · Sep 23, 2007

I agree that your underwater shots are very good. The rest are pretty plain, but overall they're still good. Some are just really bad. The worst ones are:

Centaurs in the Forest
Captured City
"Lord-Mayor" Abriss' HQ

+Rep! since I like your underwater ones.
~Craka_J

KKRP · Sep 23, 2007

Ok, I made a denser forest behind the centaur trio in Centaurs in the Forest, took a picture of inside the Captured City, and replaced "Lord-Mayor" Abbris' HQ with the city in which it sits, Loyket.

Gilles · Sep 23, 2007

Too plain. Need more in almost every screen except the underwater ones.

ragingspeedhorn · Sep 23, 2007

Yes, perhaps you are rushing your work a bit too much. When you have made something, try putting it away for a few hours or a day and then look at it again and you will notice better what you might have done wrong/poorly.

Craka_J · Sep 23, 2007

Centaurs in the Forest is much better now.

Captured City needs more decorations, especially in the center.

The first screenshot just gives me a headache...
~Craka_J

KKRP · Sep 24, 2007

The first screenshot has a lot in it doesn't it. Yeah, your right about adding more decoration, I'll get on WE later and add some then post new screens.

madman9800 · Sep 24, 2007

This terrain is OK i guess, nothing extraordinary. My favorite is the Mountain Village.

Gilles · Sep 25, 2007

Mountain village is way too flat.

KKRP · Sep 25, 2007

I made Mountain Village flatter than most of the others so the mountains look taller than they actually are. Though I could probably add some hills, as it is in the mountains.

Gilles · Sep 25, 2007

Ahh, that makes sense.

Craka_J · Sep 26, 2007

Captured City looks much better.

The last one is really plain! No tile variation! >.<

The first one could at least use a set fog...
~Craka_J

KKRP · Sep 26, 2007

Oops, forgot to turn on sky and fog when I took the first one.

TheDivineBoss · Sep 26, 2007

To be very honest and fair I think you need to work a bit on the details.
6,5/10 has been giving.

Oziris · Sep 26, 2007

I like it it is good very good all pictures are good but the Centaurs in the Forest is bad.

Gilles · Sep 27, 2007

What? That's one of the best IMO.

Oziris · Sep 27, 2007

What! ...that is what i THINK!!

Craka_J · Sep 29, 2007

Everyone is entitled to their own opinions.
~Craka_J

Gilles · Sep 29, 2007

Who said they weren't?

Craka_J · Sep 29, 2007

Gilles said:
What? That's one of the best IMO.

Oziris said:
What! ...that is what i THINK!!

qft.

~Craka_J

Gilles · Sep 29, 2007

I was just stating my opinion, hence the IMO. The "What?" didn't mean I don't think Oziris can think what he wants.

Craka_J · Oct 2, 2007

Well it seemed more like an objection. Anyway, who cares. Stupid topic anyway lol
~Craka_J

Gilles · Oct 3, 2007

True dat G! Dang I'm gansta.

I want to see an update! New stuff or something! Although I do understand it's fall now, everyones off summer holidays from work and school.

HeretoDLstuff · Oct 3, 2007

Wow, they look good! Some are worse than others, I like murloc\underwater ones the best....You should make a mur'loc campain.

KKRP · Oct 4, 2007

Yeah an update!!! :pir:

Added a screen of an island belonging to a renowned pirate hunter!

:fp:

P.S. The guy in the picture is the pirate hunter. :wink:

HeretoDLstuff · Oct 4, 2007

It looks kinda pain but its ok.

Craka_J · Oct 5, 2007

The ships wrecked is a nice touch. The jungle can be better, but it's decent. The area where all of those rocks placed either needs more rocks placed and closer to each other, and/or grass tile under it all, instead of sand. I think the fog and sky is well chosen though.
~Craka_J

FamousPker49 · Oct 6, 2007

I really like the underwater ones, some of the others weren't so hot, but anyway great job

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