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Looks great for now. I like the hair ^^ but not the left (his left) shoulder. The shading is too hard and it give impression of wierd shape. Here is a crapy image that will show you what I mean. First is a shoulder as you want it to be (I belive) and second, is how the shading making it to looks like.
He has bewbs D:
Looks great for now. I like the hair ^^ but not the left (his left) shoulder. The shading is too hard and it give impression of wierd shape. Here is a crapy image that will show you what I mean. First is a shoulder as you want it to be (I belive) and second, is how the shading making it to looks like.
(BUMP- updated.)
He seem to be shrinking in size, I don't know what's happening! Anyway, worked some on the shoulder yesterday (might scrap it, 'cause I'm not so happy with it).. figured I could use that as an excuse to bump this. Maybe some wise wanderer will pass through and throw me some advice!
Work on those flame some more...
and those white thingies that fly around them, seriously.
Ohh, those flames... they look sooo plastic. work on them. I suppose there's no need to tell that you should do his right shoulder to look like the left... detailed and smooth. If this guy's from the bible (If i got it right), how can he be wearing glasses anyway? They didn't exist in that time... Well, it's imagination i suppose
This is a WIP, I haven't got to the magic stuff yet, I'm not even close to finishing his shoulders, let alone the rest, which is just a quick doodle. I thought that was obvious.
Anyway, no, he's not from the Bible. How did you pick that up? The name Hammath is taken from the Bible, but it's not because it's in the Bible I chose it nor does this character have anything to do with the Hammath in the Bible (who I, frankly, don't know anything about).
Sorry if I sound harsh, but this really is a perfect example of people replying to threads without reading. Both of you.
Hm, interesting that you should say that. I chose Hammath, from the Bible actually, because I feel that it has a sense of power within it. Mastodorr derives from mastodon which is a breed of mammoth (if I am not mistaken) and resembles strength and endurance. The middle-name is not yet det...
(At the beginning of the thread (Before the pics)):Work in progress, feedback appreciated!
:\Hmm i dislike its hair but imo it could be artwork of a hero in the game LOL
I haven't worked on it yet.Shiik, please update (if done some changes), I would like to see the next update.
What's with the hair?Holy crap that hair
Why does he got shrinked though?
Sorry if I sound harsh, but this really is a perfect example of people replying to threads without reading. Both of you.
I wasn't talking about the WIP-ish state of the flames. The colors are odd, just one color and that's pink. Have you ever seen a flame that only has one color? The shape is a bit weird too compared to his pose. Why would he hold a flame like that? He just burns his elbows. The flame is magic, right. You could make it stay together like an orb. Magic can do that.
The white stuff just looks weird. Wip or not. If I paint something, I don't randomly smear white paint over it.
I also did read your thread and you didn't mention that your flames were wip anywhere. Even if that was what I ment, your argument still would be invalid.
You weren't harsh, you were downright rude and next time I've got a comment on your stuff, I'll just keep it for myself.
The colours are odd, because it's a WIP. It's just one colour, because it's a WIP. The shape might be weird, and it's because it's a WIP. He "holds a flame like that" and burns his elbows, because it's a WIP. I might or might not make an orb, either way, it's a WIP and anything can happen. Right now, they serve as a light-source and they will continue to regardless of what shape I choose to make them in.I wasn't talking about the WIP-ish state of the flames. The colors are odd, just one color and that's pink. Have you ever seen a flame that only has one color? The shape is a bit weird too compared to his pose. Why would he hold a flame like that? He just burns his elbows. The flame is magic, right. You could make it stay together like an orb. Magic can do that.
I don't care if the white stuff looks weird, because it's a WIP. Maybe you don't, but I do.The white stuff just looks weird. Wip or not. If I paint something, I don't randomly smear white paint over it.
I didn't mention that it was a WIP?I also did read your thread and you didn't mention that your flames were wip anywhere. Even if that was what I ment, your argument still would be invalid.
It seems I did.Work in progress, feedback appreciated!
My impression of your comment was similar. I'm glad you'll keep it to yourself next time.You weren't harsh, you were downright rude and next time I've got a comment on your stuff, I'll just keep it for myself.
The colours are odd, because it's a WIP. It's just one colour, because it's a WIP. The shape might be weird, and it's because it's a WIP. He "holds a flame like that" and burns his elbows, because it's a WIP. I might or might not make an orb, either way, it's a WIP and anything can happen. Right now, they serve as a light-source and they will continue to regardless of what shape I choose to make them in.
I didn't mention that it was a WIP?