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Seige of the Virodar
- Author(s)
- Timejumper
- Tags
- Defense / Survival
- Size
- 3.36 MB
- Rating
- Downloads
- 26
- Created
- Jan 26, 2014
- Updated
- Mar 15, 2014
- Resources
- 1
- State
Approved
This bundle is marked as useful / simple. Simplicity is bliss, low effort and/or may contain minor bugs.
Having crashed to Maredoron a month ago, the Hadri of the Virodar have unintentionally brought the wrath of the Burning Legion to the denizens of their new home. Now the kingdoms of Ios, Boletaria, and the Forgotten City have massed their armies at the ship's base, ready to stand against the might of the Legion
Every few minutes, Ios, Boletaria, and the Forgotten City get ten additional units, Nyss for Ios, Nerubian Warriors for the Forgotten City, and Overburrow Warriors for Boletaria. Also, after three minutes, those three factions get a second hero
Model Credits
HappyTauren
Takakenji
Hexus
Ujimasa Hojo
Kofi_Banan
Blizzard Entertainment
Special Thanks to the My Little Pony RP Forum
Keywords:
My Little Pony, Original Location
Every few minutes, Ios, Boletaria, and the Forgotten City get ten additional units, Nyss for Ios, Nerubian Warriors for the Forgotten City, and Overburrow Warriors for Boletaria. Also, after three minutes, those three factions get a second hero
Model Credits
HappyTauren
Takakenji
Hexus
Ujimasa Hojo
Kofi_Banan
Blizzard Entertainment
Special Thanks to the My Little Pony RP Forum
Keywords:
My Little Pony, Original Location
Contents
Reviews
- Joined
- Nov 4, 2013
- Messages
- 2,017
Very cheap map! That's why:-
- Very flat and awful terrain
- All units and buildings are applied disorderly and too closely to each other
- Why the demons don't attack me? If I should attack them, then why creating defences?
- Archimonde cannot be killed because his armor is Divine and no unit has Chaos attack
- Heroes and 90% of the units are obviously copy-pasted. Same abilities, attack damage, HP and even armor
- No quests so nothing that tells me what to do and so no credits list in the game
- Disordered spawning of reinforcements
- Booooooring
There is no need for me to continue so I'll go to suggestions
SUGGESTIONS:-
- Read tutorials about terraining, you have the look of a novice terrainer. Till now, I can simply tell you to make your terrain more hilly by using Raise/Lower in the Terrain Palette and use more tiles and doodads
- "Seige" is wrong. "Siege" is correct. Correct this mistake
- Every unit must be put in a neat way, not spamming them anywhere as you did with the demons
- Talking about the demons, they should attack my base and try to destroy the main building, otherwise I cannot lose!
- Put a victory condition, otherwise I'll never win also!
- Back to the units, they shouldn't be put in restricted clusters but separately. Otherwise, you'll create overcrowding, congested paths and a confused mass of units
- Heroes, units and abilities MUST NEVER resemble original ones
- What can I say again? Ah yes, the reinforcements should also spawn in a neat way, not in messy clumps/ You might let them come from a road, not spawning magically from nothing
- Last thing, your game needs something unique and exciting, otherwise nothing will distinguish this map from others
OVERALL RESULT:-
Well, I'm sorry but this map is terrible! Can't give this more than 1/5 and I surely vote for CERTAIN REJECTION!
- Very flat and awful terrain
- All units and buildings are applied disorderly and too closely to each other
- Why the demons don't attack me? If I should attack them, then why creating defences?
- Archimonde cannot be killed because his armor is Divine and no unit has Chaos attack
- Heroes and 90% of the units are obviously copy-pasted. Same abilities, attack damage, HP and even armor
- No quests so nothing that tells me what to do and so no credits list in the game
- Disordered spawning of reinforcements
- Booooooring
There is no need for me to continue so I'll go to suggestions
SUGGESTIONS:-
- Read tutorials about terraining, you have the look of a novice terrainer. Till now, I can simply tell you to make your terrain more hilly by using Raise/Lower in the Terrain Palette and use more tiles and doodads
- "Seige" is wrong. "Siege" is correct. Correct this mistake
- Every unit must be put in a neat way, not spamming them anywhere as you did with the demons
- Talking about the demons, they should attack my base and try to destroy the main building, otherwise I cannot lose!
- Put a victory condition, otherwise I'll never win also!
- Back to the units, they shouldn't be put in restricted clusters but separately. Otherwise, you'll create overcrowding, congested paths and a confused mass of units
- Heroes, units and abilities MUST NEVER resemble original ones
- What can I say again? Ah yes, the reinforcements should also spawn in a neat way, not in messy clumps/ You might let them come from a road, not spawning magically from nothing
- Last thing, your game needs something unique and exciting, otherwise nothing will distinguish this map from others
OVERALL RESULT:-
Well, I'm sorry but this map is terrible! Can't give this more than 1/5 and I surely vote for CERTAIN REJECTION!
- Joined
- Sep 6, 2013
- Messages
- 6,743
Lacking gameplay/terrain/triggers. I vote for Rejection
I would start a thread here: Map Develpment Forum, because your map doesnt seem to be finished.
Read a tutorial about memory leaks. It's about essential knowledge for each map maker. You find a link in my signature.
I would start a thread here: Map Develpment Forum, because your map doesnt seem to be finished.
Read a tutorial about memory leaks. It's about essential knowledge for each map maker. You find a link in my signature.
- Joined
- Aug 2, 2013
- Messages
- 165
Not gonna even review this right now, because description needs improvement and some screenshots would be good too.
