Seige of the Virodar

[Moderator]

12:03, 15th Mar 2014
Orcnet: incomplete map description, please apply at least some screen shots.

 

[Shadow Fury]

Very cheap map! That's why:-

- Very flat and awful terrain
- All units and buildings are applied disorderly and too closely to each other
- Why the demons don't attack me? If I should attack them, then why creating defences?
- Archimonde cannot be killed because his armor is Divine and no unit has Chaos attack
- Heroes and 90% of the units are obviously copy-pasted. Same abilities, attack damage, HP and even armor
- No quests so nothing that tells me what to do and so no credits list in the game
- Disordered spawning of reinforcements
- Booooooring

There is no need for me to continue so I'll go to suggestions

SUGGESTIONS:-
- Read tutorials about terraining, you have the look of a novice terrainer. Till now, I can simply tell you to make your terrain more hilly by using Raise/Lower in the Terrain Palette and use more tiles and doodads
- "Seige" is wrong. "Siege" is correct. Correct this mistake
- Every unit must be put in a neat way, not spamming them anywhere as you did with the demons
- Talking about the demons, they should attack my base and try to destroy the main building, otherwise I cannot lose!
- Put a victory condition, otherwise I'll never win also!
- Back to the units, they shouldn't be put in restricted clusters but separately. Otherwise, you'll create overcrowding, congested paths and a confused mass of units
- Heroes, units and abilities MUST NEVER resemble original ones
- What can I say again? Ah yes, the reinforcements should also spawn in a neat way, not in messy clumps/ You might let them come from a road, not spawning magically from nothing
- Last thing, your game needs something unique and exciting, otherwise nothing will distinguish this map from others

OVERALL RESULT:-
Well, I'm sorry but this map is terrible! Can't give this more than 1/5 and I surely vote for CERTAIN REJECTION!

 

[IcemanBo]

Lacking gameplay/terrain/triggers. I vote for Rejection

I would start a thread here: Map Develpment Forum, because your map doesnt seem to be finished.

Read a tutorial about memory leaks. It's about essential knowledge for each map maker. You find a link in my signature.

 

[taavidude]

Not gonna even review this right now, because description needs improvement and some screenshots would be good too.