CWeener's Review {UN-Protected maps} V3.709 Review # 27

Reviewing the map "Custom Hero War v1.08"

Rating System (in weener points:)

Rating System (in weener points:)

1-10 Originality (Is this your work? Is it original? (are there maps like it?))
1-10 Replayability (discounted for most cinematics*)
1-10 Triggering (discounted for protected maps*)
1-10 Terraining (tile placement, doodad/destructable placement, lighting, sounds, fog(s), hills.)
1-10 Object Managing (custom items and destructibles etc...)
1-10 Spells (if applies**)
1-10 Description (On THW)
1-15 Engaging (fun to play or requires you to pay attention)
1-15 Misc (size, system implementation, laginess etc...)
-100 or +100 for abiding by THW rules.
_{* = when one is discounted then other sections maximums are raised, and those sections are judged harder (if your map applies then it will show you what i raised later)
** = some maps dont really need spells so this section is discounted and given an automatic 10.}

Rating System Scores

Rating System Scores

Less than 100 = FF- (Reported, You clearly didnt abide by all of the posting rules, and I have reported you for (not) doing so.)
100-150 Points = F- (Rancid, and Needs major work. Vote for Rejection and no +rep.)
151-160 Points = F (Bad, and Needs work. vote for Rejection and no +rep.)
161-170 Points = D (Below Average, and Needs much updating. has potential. vote for rejection* and no +rep.)
171-180 Points = C (Okay, but Needs updates. Has potential. Vote for rejection* and no +rep.)
181-190 Points = B (Good, but still not reaching full potential vote for approval but no +rep)
191-199 Points = A (Great and probably has reached full potential**. good job. vote for approval and +rep.)
200 Points = A+ (Amazing, you did everything right and went all out, approval and +rep)
_{* = depending on the map really, and what categories it scored low in
** = not always but most cases.}

Custom Hero War v1.08

Custom Hero War v1.08

1-10 Originality *8* Original aspects.
1-10 Replayability *10* No bugs to adversely affect this.
1-10 Terraining *8* I noticed you knew how to tile progress. (getting less grassy near water) You just don't have enough tiles. For the top left corner, use triggers to make the lava(ish) terrain. to save room for more tiles.
1-10 Triggering *2* You had leaks, yet you cleared some, which was strange, and shows that you don't fully understand leaks. Go here.
1-10 Object Managing *10* Lots of custom and colored objects.
1-10 Spells *10* Bugfree. Good spell choosing system.
1-10 Description *9* Great description.
1-15 Engaging *14*
1-15 Misc *12* You had leaks. You had some inefficient triggers. Loading screen was low-quality though. Go full resolution next time.
-100 or 100 Rules *+100*
0-200 All-in-all *183* B (Good, but still not reaching full potential vote for approval but no +rep)

Author's Note,

Well, nice. Slightly unoriginal in overall theme. Triggers weren't good. The object managing was good. Go to some tuts. Do a few things here and there and this map could be an "A".

Bugs I found

Bugs:
No that I saw.

Recommendations

Recommendations:
Go to the recommended leak tutorial.
Do the thing I recommended with terrain.
Make the camera move with the hero during the first part. When you're picking abilities, and such.
Make the game display that you have to type -start.

Likes&Dislikes

[liked]
The spell picking system.
The obj editor work.
The doodad placement and usage.


[disliked]
The triggers.

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