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09:56, 13th Aug 2009
oh_snap: Overall, it has a scratchiness feeling to it, which throws off the entire icon. You need to make the weapon, at the very least, smoother, and more like a nice clean metal blade. It also looks extremely 2D, seeming to lack shadows, and highlights in some places. The background needs some work aswell, and I would suggest use this for inspiration: http://www.iphoneatmo.com/images/wallpapers/3anjj37ib.jpg And as for the scratchiness, it's something that has bothered me about most of your icons, as it throws off the icons as a whole.
08:42, 19th Aug 2009
zombie2279: No changes made, but I guess it's approvable.
oh_snap: Overall, it has a scratchiness feeling to it, which throws off the entire icon. You need to make the weapon, at the very least, smoother, and more like a nice clean metal blade. It also looks extremely 2D, seeming to lack shadows, and highlights in some places. The background needs some work aswell, and I would suggest use this for inspiration: http://www.iphoneatmo.com/images/wallpapers/3anjj37ib.jpg And as for the scratchiness, it's something that has bothered me about most of your icons, as it throws off the icons as a whole.
08:42, 19th Aug 2009
zombie2279: No changes made, but I guess it's approvable.