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15:54, 9th Feb 2016
GhostThruster: the thick black outline around the pendant makes it look too cartoony. it's hard to tell what it is due to weak shading and the way you've drawn the silk cloth background makes the pendant look like a butterfly :/
13:25, 10th Feb 2016
GhostThruster: you uploaded the wrong btn file
. for the rest, the pendant definitely looks better without the black outline, but the shading is still poor (might wanna use a ref pic like this to get a better idea of a pendant's texture & shading) and the background is now even more confusing than before. i recommend just keeping the background black, and maybe zoom out of the pendant a bit and give it a neck chain. but if you can get the idea of a silk background to work and look good, more power to you.
GhostThruster: the thick black outline around the pendant makes it look too cartoony. it's hard to tell what it is due to weak shading and the way you've drawn the silk cloth background makes the pendant look like a butterfly :/
13:25, 10th Feb 2016
GhostThruster: you uploaded the wrong btn file
. for the rest, the pendant definitely looks better without the black outline, but the shading is still poor (might wanna use a ref pic like this to get a better idea of a pendant's texture & shading) and the background is now even more confusing than before. i recommend just keeping the background black, and maybe zoom out of the pendant a bit and give it a neck chain. but if you can get the idea of a silk background to work and look good, more power to you.
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