BTNBreathOfFire

Moderator · Dec 31, 2013

23:24, 1st Jan 2014
Kimbo: Goodjob, looks nice. But the flow of the fire is rather incorrect. It DOES look like fire, well done fire...cept it has no flow of fire....maybe try experimenting more on how fire flows ok?

Edit: No updated. Rejected.

Anderhil · Dec 31, 2013

i can see your skills have improved! +Rep and 3/5. you can improve it with more effects thou.

Deleted member 219079 · Dec 31, 2013

I think the background shouldn't be that empty. I know where to use this, not at this stage though :/

Shadow Fury · Dec 31, 2013

If that's a breath of fire, it should be bright and not with the dreary black background. Also, the fire isn't very detailed. It doesn't look a lot like fire to me.

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