Craka_J: Needs a better description. Not approved.

Earth-Fury: The terrain is horribly ugly. Far too little variations in the doodads, almost NO tile variation, randomly noized terrain... generally BAD. The English used in the dialogue is very poor. There isn't really a story, just random violence. Its long and boring. The same camera angles seem to be used for most of it. The desert battle sucked. All over poor quality. But, it works, so approved.

I'm sorry, but it looks like this map isn't completed at all:
- Bad terraining
- Bad camera (it should be smooth - when yo see the armies, the camera just spins around for about a minute or 2...)
- The intro looks obscure (thoughbad terraining), but the battle in the desert is just crap
- You expect the lord of all undead to do something really cool, but he just runs away and dies in the end (you can't even see arthas kill him)
- poor english, lots of spelling and grammar mistakes
- no special effects, nobody even uses a standard ability

I'm sorry to have put it this way, but by trying other things you may improve it...
(try smooth camera movements, correct your spelling and add a special effect)
no rating atm

First transmission runs too fast.
Excessive monotonous spinning camera makes dizziness.
Terrain with only one-two tiles and badly/randomly levelled.
There's no need for the dreadlord to actually hit the gates so many times.
Paladin, MK and Archmage just remain there while the other troops get off screen.
There's no story, just random text.
The Dark Emperor did not even try to defend himself.