17:44, 9th Aug 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

You might want to work on your English, yet the description and details made me curious! -Will test it out and give my verdict as soon as possible!

[...] Well, I've tested out a "Yaw" (strange name for an Infernal, dude) and "Omnius" from a variety of hero...I mean avatars available in the 6 taverns (3 on the Light side, 3 on the Dark side *they have cookies*). I've gotta say, at first, although unimpressed by the simplicity of the terrain, creeps and doodads, the first thing that sprung into my eye were the abilities! Hello! -Custom abilities for each avatar! (I wasn't expecting that from a map with such a small file-size). Of course, the magic lasted a few minutes, since the map is pretty...buggy,sad to say. For one thing, "Yaw"s 3rd ability,a passive which I forget the name of, does the strangest thing when creeping : instantly kills the unit(s) that follow Yaw...I'm not kidding, just do this : Use Chaos Meteor on any creeps,then run ; you'll notice a few seconds after following you,they die in a burst of green fire,just as though they've been affected by the AoE damage this aura was suppose to do when triggered,when an enemy died... Second : the creeps spawn too fast? -I don't know if they're supposed to do that,but in mere seconds from killing creeps in an area, different ones immediately re-spawn,giving you no time regenerate / cool-down spells. And if that's not bad enough, some have the nasty tendency of using all their mana on you - a ~Mutant Murloc~ used some sort of ~Poison dagger~ on me,then his pair,did the same thing, leaving me rotting away in a few seconds after impact. (Aggressive A.I.,eh?). Enough complaining though, I wish you'd invest a lot more time in this map DL] P!GGY,since (from my point of view), it could become really enjoyable in the near future. Alas,final words :
-Terrain (not even bumps,ramps, or anything) 1/5 ; Heroes / Abilities (nice, some are unique) 3/5 -Items : ...meh 2/5. Over-all : 2/5 -Rejected for now. Waiting for updates!

Keep giving me feedback on what you think and I'll try to do what I can. Keep in mind that this game will be more enjoyable in 5v5.

the creeps are suppose to die after they leave their camp area. In older version the creeps spawn slower and does not have any abilities but i decided to overhaul the creeps abilities and spawning system to provide a different metagame. I'll try to do something with the terrain.

I apologize on my English because English is not my first language. I will try to improve it.

Terrain: A bit simple terrain, nothing special, a bunch of trees, flat with nothing but trees...

Gameplay: A bit confusing, and I can say, very strange, why not to get EXP from creeps? What Im supposed to do, stay 40 minutes to gain high level? Seriosly.. and the shops, oh my gawd, all with the same model, you can't imagine how confusing is that. The other things was okay, heroes are well explained before you buy/hire them and you can get the maximum information you need.

Other: Only 2 quests? Hm.. thats bad, try to separate all things, like Modes, Gameplay, Credits, Bug Report, etc.. That will make it look nice, and players won't need to scroll down the whole quests to search one single line.

At all, nicly done map, but you need to improve the terrain realy because it realy too simple. Check the tutorials section for terraing tutorials, they realy help.

I give this map a 3/5 rating, and neutral vote (for now).

I don't have time to test, and I also think Light vs Dark forces is a cliche', but I can see your great effort on this. +REP (First one)

Thanks for the excellent feedbacks, the reason why everyone cannot get exp from creeps is to provide a more balance gameplay. I'll try to make an update as soon as possible.

Hmmm heres a suggestion. Make the forest denser and make sort of like a living forest whereby every few seconds some tree die and some tree grow, maybe to suddenly block the running hero? Anyways, 3.7/5. =D

Umm.. ok. than make a small system, so everytime when lets say a Avatar kills 10-20 creeps, he gets bonus exp/gold .. that will make it fair, so you can race with your teammates and with the enemy to gain exp/gold faster or you can choose to make earlier gangs.

Well, great map! Exp. gaining system is original and cool. Moreover spells are custom ^^.

Great map!

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Rejection

Reason for not approving:
The terrain is pretty much one tile per side. BAD.
There aren't any cool features either...like ANYTHING.