Your Civilization

[varsaigen]

Critique:

we have portable photo-blades, thiner than an atom.

How the HELL do you get things thinner than an atom? the atom is the smallest thing int ANY universe! It is what makes everything else possible! NOTHING can be thinner than an atom. -.-

Dark Energy Weapons of Massive Oblivion, codenamed "DEMO"

Actually, that would be DEWMO (Dark Energy Weapons of Mass Obliteration.

So... to sum it up: you are a dark energy species, sealed within crystal bodies. Your ships remind me of the borg (rofl), and you have awkward shield technology, and guns that fire... gas? at epicly fast speeds to act as a bullt against our hulls... and shields.

 

[varsaigen]

((continued from above))

Your sphere ships are not spheres, so they can keep from temporal distortions? ??? a perfect sphere can hold up to hurricanes better than an egg, so why would it be reversed with temporal distortions? by the way, temporal, if I recall, implicates time travel technology?

 

[Tleno]

Atom? Maybe his blades are made from electrons & neutrons?

 

[sacridshadow]

yes, temporal is all about time travel. The show Doctor Who mentons temporal shifts alot (when an episode called for it. common in the series. XD).

 

[Darkgamma]

PHoTo-blades mean Photonic Hadronic Tachionic Blades.
DEMO was used to save character space, I had 1067 out of 1000. And no, that is not simple gas, those are cathions, negative ions used only for anion destruction, positive ion. Yes they are made eliptical so more room for crew x.x And yes, Mother Star's energy diminishes temporal disturbance inside. U can't time travel, in English. But you can get a portal inside the thing if you get through the energy wasting shields.

 

[Darkgamma]

And I didn't say they were spheres, they are, and I quote, Orbs. And we are really imbalanced, in a way.

 

[Darkgamma]

To protect against our weaponry, use hulls which aren't ions, x.x To get over our disturbing ship construction, look at it like it's a Sphere, because the way it's shaped, it is a sphere.

 

[Darkgamma]

We keep from temporal distortions by the base principle of Dark matter. Dark matter bends light and gravity, correct? This disortion bends the spatial web, diverting temporal energy out of the ship, shapes the eliptical hexa/octagonical construction into a spherical shape. Due to the elastisity of our ships, impact projectiles are weaker against the construction. Use beam/plasma/antigravity/laser/gravity/heat/radiation, anything that is small enough to pass through our 4m holes in the octa/hexagonical construction.

 

[Darkgamma]

Back to topic:

Our hierarchy consists of a complex system of levels. The Dark Order, as we call it, is a celular array. The ever-decreasing number of members as the order rises, from thousands to a few. The high Inquisitor, Ka-Yasha'su, commands the Akashan system.
Our mentality, as you call it, is neither peaceful, nor warlike. We focus mostly on science.
Nothing else interests us. And finally, we are extremely vunerable to light going below 401 nm in wavelenght and 3 times stronger than Akasha's, that is light of Sol

 

[Darkgamma]

I think I finished my explanation.

 

[Tleno]

Finish your avatar too. Its annoying.

 

[varsaigen]

Dark matter bends light and gravity

So, you smear the "blood" of your best friend so your ships aren't effected by temporal distortions, and to bend light and energy around the ship.

We focus mostly on science.

We have something in common

we are extremely vunerable to light going below 401 nm in wavelenght and 3 times stronger than Akasha's, that is light of Sol

So, a sun. All we have to do is shine sunlight on you? That sounds easy enough. I'll have some armoured ships latch on to your ships, and hull them to the closest sun And I will slowly destroy you (that is, if you wage war on me :3 or try to take over my systems, or any sort of invasion, even population based)

Finish your avatar too. Its annoying.

ABSOLUTELY!!!!!!!!! D:

 

[StormWarriors2]

i got a head ache at staring at the other avatar with the hands

 

[StormWarriors2]

one thing also sol is under no ones control. no one controls it apart from the Imperium which no one plays because i said so and this isn't warhammer 40k

 

[sacridshadow]

well, actually, DarkIron Dwarf had it for awhile. He left after he got it into a major civil war and only had ships that flew through space. no warp drives or anything. (He has a fascination for the Irish in his RPs. I wish he'd keep it out. DX) and he somehow managed to suddenly appear in our area, far far away, where it would take more than a million years to reach us at maximum warp. THere was no portals, no teleportation. He just... appeared, and had super destroyers with ten energy shields that were almost impervious. (I had to focuse fire just to get rid of two fo the shields. but var could scare him off by sending his juggernaugh mining vessel towards his ships. XD He fled.)

 

[varsaigen]

rofl ah yes, the glorious Planet Crackers >:3

 

[StormWarriors2]

Would it stand up to my Battle Barges/Planet Killers? (they can expolde an entire planet XD without even fire their lance weaporny XD. (lance Weaponry is so great) espically if we have 20 of them XD. ahhh space marines priceless.

 

[StormWarriors2]

DarkIron Dwarf would get owned by the Alliance of Five also because they have the best ships in their gaxaly so yeah. Also they won't being coming back until everyone gets more active. so for now i will use my space marine strike force. 1000 marines strong.

 

[varsaigen]

well, a Planet Cracker is a mining ship, and the bombs it uses are practically nukes (with enough force to rip a planet asunder if it reaches the core (drilling holes to the center, and sends bomb in)) Because of these bombs, it has VERY thick armour (15 feet of nanosteel) and moves at a relatively good speed for a juggernaught. I really dunno. They can be used as great support ships in battle, being the massive bombers they are >:3

 

[sacridshadow]

lol I was talking about your juggernaught gas miner, not the planet crackers. XD My destroyer can burn the surface of a planet, with ease. lol 50 major beam cannons on each quarter. so on one side alone, it has 100 beam turrets to scour the planets or enemy ships. In between those beam turrets, however, are missile launchers, rail guns, and anti-fighter beam turrets (alot smaller than the cap-ship turrets). I would only use all of the beam turrets on a planet if I utterly half to. My juggernaught also has transdimensional cloak (can turn invisible, or jump dimensions, but has to return to go to another dimension.). If it is cloaked, if can fire it's weapons once, before running out of power. This means that it is open to attack for a few minutes. Because of that, I keep my destroyer with the juggernaught to cover for any anti cap ships or weapons.

 

[sacridshadow]

((Continued))
Also, the beam turrets on the juggernaught, if focused on one spot, can begin to melt away the surface of the planet. It only gets easier from there. When burning away the surface of a planet, it sweeps in two rows. One does the burning, the other does the finishing. lol It's a nice process, but people complained about my power. This only happened because of Darkiron Dwarf. (He was really active at the time, and he didn't care about the rules, since this was originally his RP. he later gave it to var when he left. *yay!* XD)

 

[Darkgamma]

You think that you can destroy us with the sun? Noez! We must buy suncream!! Noez

Oh and a reply to the above post:



Juggernaught is really strong it seems, planetmelter! Uh! That sounds like godmod! Oh noez! Yeahs! We got a solution! Oh noez! It is energy-inneficient and bloddy! It is WAR!! And without planets as ships.

Oh and nukes work, too ;D

 

[varsaigen]

Well, the Juggernaughts are something that can easily run a blockade. My flagship is such a ship, and has no problem plowing through for the rest of the fleet. My Planetcrackers have a simular situation, cause nobody really wants to get in their way Now, my Juggernaught gasminer can hold 5 fleets (20-25 gas miners each) worth of gas., Now that makes it a HUGE target, which justifies it's value as a juggernaught as well. If needed, it can selfdestruct, using all the gas within to imitate a sun's nova, though on a lower scale. But it does make sure as a last resort, that no one can get the gas.

 

[StormWarriors2]

Darkgamma just to tell you can't steal from players. Thats wrong. Also their are something Nicknamed Planet Killers which are monsitrous ships of doom that take at least an 2 entire Battle Fleets to destory. Thank Goodness their are only 10 in existance so far as we know -.- . also my Fleet Would own you but i will not interfer with these actions until you declare war which is impossible. i would like to see you attack the Imperium of Man see how well that would go for you. Also the Alliance of five is returning!!!!! (editing some stuff with them changing history yada getting Some characters down)

 

[varsaigen]

I dunno. I think I could drive in a rather hard dent in theiir forces if I wanted to... >:3

 

[sacridshadow]

Ok, so darkgamma, I don't get the sun comment.
and StormWarriors2, how do you think that declaring war is impossible for him? He has as much a chance as I do. Though, I'm pretty sure neither one of you would want to go against my juggernaught. XD

 

[StormWarriors2]

i was saying that the gaxaly is unreachable. -.- ever since the portal was destoried.

 

[StormWarriors2]

but what soo good about your Juggernaught? how big is it? and Darkgamma is new i'm just stating is he needs to think this through a little bit.

 

[varsaigen]

I would if I had the need (llike you moving into my land)

 

[StormWarriors2]

XD oh. Lol still doesn't answer my question XD

 

[sacridshadow]

ummm, I don't quite know how large mine is. It's about the size of var's juggernaught. So I'd guess about 12 km.

 

[varsaigen]

Mine's about 7 km actually. Still a pretty good size (larger than the Collossus from Freespace 2 by 50% ) and is one hell of a weapon! > Now, the planet Crackers are 6 km in a circle though, shaped as the picture shows )

 

[StormWarriors2]

Huh thats as big as a battle barge XD o wait its 4km and the Emperor Class Ship is 8 Km.
and the Guardian fighters are midjets compared to the support craft XD

 

[sacridshadow]

Ok, so mines about 10 km. I wasnt sure about the size and previously didn't care, as evryone knew how large juggernaughts can be. lol Nobody really bothered with size measurements.

 

[varsaigen]

and the gas miner juggernaught that I have, able to store 5 fleets (100 gas miners total) worth of nebulonic gas, is about 6.8 km

 

[StormWarriors2]

huh well mine have better shields and we can ram with no damage dealt to the the ship XD thank you adaminant sheilding and armor XD. i'm serious if i rammed you with the emperor class your f---ed because when those things blow up they can destory entire systems with still enough power to destory another one XD

 

[varsaigen]

now that's just cheap -.- NO blowing up systems. I have already had to cheat death by implementing something I had never mentioned, My Nova shields, when Misha blew up a sun to escape a fighter -.- No blowing up systems, and that's FINAL -.- Do you know JUST how much fuel that would require? You'd have to tuck a sun away inside of your ship! >_>

What makes you think your hull is better? WHat makes you think you can get away with no damage? EVERYTHING gets damaged in a collision. Just how large is your ship, btw? 8km? Why would a ship that's 8 km pwn a ship that's 7 km without a scratch? You can't easily judge something when you have no clue of all the peices.

For example: My hull is composed of nano-steel. Thoough not completly steel, it is incredibly strong and is about 8 inches thick on my flagship. My PlanetCrackers have 15 feet of the stuff cause they are constantly at risk of their bombs detonating as they leave the launch tube.

 

[varsaigen]

((Continued from above))

Nano steel is stronger than most materials could hope to be, and go through a careful production process to eliminate any contaminants. As far as shields go, they are good against energy weapons. physical objects are pretty good at getting through though. But that does not mean that a shield can take the brunt of a 7km and 8 km ships colliding. Besides, you'd be heavily under fire if you attempted such a stunt, as my beam cannons woiuld wor to slice through your hull. Now, for your specs to be listed. >:3

 

[StormWarriors2]

I know its agianst Galatic Law to destory planets.

Also Adaminti is the strongest matieral known to this race where talking about a race that is past Sentienice a race that has no longer need to advance techonology but their problem is they won't want to risk their people, they are few in number compared to most races.

 

[varsaigen]

So, instead of ramming my ship, they should ask for help! XD I don't sense this from the overly proud Order of 5 lol

 

[sacridshadow]

lol my juggernaught is about 10 kms long. XD You can't ram my ship apart. lol I've done such a thing with my destroyer to misha's flagship. XD He left a crippled force after I rammed into his side and then used my forward beam cannons to gut him. XD I loved it, he HATED it. but at least he accepted that it's possible for that to happen. lol I think you'll love my forces. lol

 

[varsaigen]

ah yes. We are SO creative rofl XD

 

[StormWarriors2]

XD. well i don't understand why you would go agianst a more advance civliazation that could posibly tear you apart but they won't. i.e they have a weapon that can exterimate an entire fleet and no species not even a robot is immune to it. This pasagon is uncureable it is a small sentient bug that eats sentient beings from the inside out. Even AI's fear it for these bugs can infest the major systems. Thankfully the Alliance of Five has banned its use. Not Because it was effective but that it was too effective and created a being that plauges their gaxaly. Also another great weapon is the Lancer MK VI Hell Cannon which can tear the Xel-Naga Ships APART, also it disintergrates all eletrical currents in the enemy ships. This is not banned.

 

[StormWarriors2]

The Battle Barges of the Alliance can activate a Warp Core engine when used is the ship well flux and bend and then a massive tear through the fabric of space acures. This has been banned. The MK 4 version of this is much safer. instead it makes a massive expolsion which is a mega EMP burst that knocks out all eletrical current. the ship is still remained intact. The reason why the Alliance is losing is because of how proud they were and how aggorant to the other races. hence why they are losing is because they are few in number.
By the Way the race is not rigged at all they are losing a war they spread out their civlization into other gaxalies while the rest of the military forces still fight for control. This has proved difficult. Their Main Planet where the discovery of the WayGates was found on the ancient world Nejis. where they found there a Dormant Gate which can teleport them into other Gaxalies which before proved impossible.

 

[varsaigen]

so... they ban all these weapons that they could use to devestate their enemies..... why? Cause of "moral" issues?!?! Somethings wrong in their head. If your survival as a species or group of species is on the line, there is always morality in trying to ensure your survival. :/

 

[StormWarriors2]

Well they wish not to harm nature and they have moral issues about this stuff like the protoss disapprove of these weaponry and the Guardians approve but the Xerizuen and the Elites cannot choose. And the Caltrios choose to approve but the Caltrios is then sees its problems and improve on the techonolgy to make sure it is safer. The plague is really bad it is very dangerous, it has decimated an entire systems so they had to destory the plague. That is why they have alot of banned weaponry but they also have alot of legal weaponry that they have. They also have weaponry which rival that of the banned weaponry. They are peaceful they don't want to break intergalatic code.

 

[varsaigen]

er... Xel'Naga, Protss....??? Misha played the Protoss. Are you telling me that there is another race calling themselves the Protoss, that AREN'T the race from Starcraft? Or are they being altered for RPing usage? :?

 

[Tleno]

No. All what he talks about is Spore based. Those are Spore Protoss. Of course, Spore Picatchu and Pikmin are much awesomier races...

 

[varsaigen]

now that's scary... but do they have to use the same name? Misha already has the Protoss

 

[Tleno]

Yes. They should. But we need to find another good name for them first...