im sorry, but as it is, i would not approve it at all. For starters, its CnP. and on the other note, its very bad CnP meaning, In game it looks absolutely horrid. So please. read the rules. Skins must be at LEAST 75% freehand and only 25% percent of a skin can be CnP/recolour. Another tip to live by is to consider the wrap. if your not considering the wrap, than the unwrap may look good, but the skin ingame will be an absolute mess. An example is the skin youve provided here. The Hive has many tutorials that you can check out to show you how to do the basics of art. But best of luck and keep trying.
~Dentothor