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Wild Things(Better!)
- Author(s)
- leventopoulo
- Size
- 3.83 MB
- Rating
- Downloads
- 20
- Created
- Jan 10, 2010
- Updated
- Jan 10, 2010
- Resources
- 1
- State
Approved
This bundle is marked as useful / simple. Simplicity is bliss, low effort and/or may contain minor bugs.
Wild Thing's
SynopsisTwo female students wealthy, popular Cindy and poor dweller Angela accuse John Galt, of rape.
| Gendre: | Thriller |
Duration: | 5 minutes |
Plot type: | Extensive plot twists |
Creator: | leventopoulo |
GreditsAT&T LABS (TTS voices),The Godfather Soundtrack (Music),Find Sounds.com(Sound Effects).
Keywords:
Twists,Twist,plot,thriller,leventopoulo,creazy,smart,weird,AT&T,TTS,Text,to,speech,wild,things,youtube,1998,movie,adaptation
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Reviews
- Joined
- Feb 3, 2009
- Messages
- 3,292
Actually, deleting it still breaks the rules if you upload it again, so fail.
- Joined
- Feb 17, 2009
- Messages
- 562
Well a few things i have to say about that:
-Story is kind of switching alot^^; so its good but not to special
-The voices where a good idea, but sometimes the emotions are missing
-you should add a trigger that alows the watcher to quit the cinematic(like Esc)
All in all i liked it
-Story is kind of switching alot^^; so its good but not to special
-The voices where a good idea, but sometimes the emotions are missing
-you should add a trigger that alows the watcher to quit the cinematic(like Esc)
All in all i liked it
- Joined
- Mar 17, 2009
- Messages
- 68
Well a few things i have to say about that:
-Story is kind of switching alot^^; so its good but not to special
-The voices where a good idea, but sometimes the emotions are missing
-you should add a trigger that alows the watcher to quit the cinematic(like Esc)
All in all i liked it
-Yep the story switches alot! I did my best to make it Understanding.
-Text To Speech is a under development Project in AT&T... But i like it!
-You are right! But there is always Alt-F4 and the EXIT...
Thank you very much
I didnt upload it again!! i drastically improved it! :/
Actually it is different! It is not the same as before!... Plus the name is different! it is 2 minutes longer then before....:/
Indead it is! but i did not multy upload!!!
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- Feb 3, 2009
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How can you just ignore the fact that you break the rules -_-
EDIT: Very well if you insist, I'll let other users decide, if it's not rule breaking to delete your map, and upload a much improved version.
EDIT: Very well if you insist, I'll let other users decide, if it's not rule breaking to delete your map, and upload a much improved version.
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- Joined
- Nov 10, 2008
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- 2,021
It is rule violation to multi-upload.
Use the Update button to make updates!
Use the Update button to make updates!
- Joined
- Jul 6, 2008
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- 105
There's a reason why there is an update button -____________-
- Joined
- Jan 26, 2007
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- 4,789
You are breaking the rules...
That's like saying "MyMap V1.00" has a different name than "MyMap V2.00".
And if you cannot use the update-button, that means I don't want you to update it (I know, I'm not the easiest guy around).
I have rated this according to importance.
Obviously, triggers don't really matter a lot if the story and terrain are absolutely brilliant.
Triggers: very bad: waits instead of timers, leaks, inefficient. (1/5)
Terrain: blizzard cliffs for walls, do I have to say more? (2/15)
Story: I couldn't really tell what kind of story it was supposed to be, half of the cinematic existed out of "X minutes later", some plot changes were pretty predictable (John Galt's dead for example), the entire plot looked like some kind of cheap detective show with a few flaws (4/20)
Use of imports: TTS doesn't have emotions... not good, only the judge's voice was avarage for the first few words, the sound effects weren't bad though. (3/10)
Atmosphere (camera, filters, typo's, ...): the camera was very static, there was no good transition between camera movements (if the camera was moving), most of the time the camera movement existed out of 1 camera going to the other and back again.
There were a lot of annoying grammatical mistakes, especially the overdone comma, which you placed when it was absolutely not necessary.
The dream filter did fit in with the plot (2/10)
Total: 12/60 = 1/5 (20%)
And I've been pretty nice now...
Different name? I don't think so, the others were called "Wild Things" (exactly like that), if you think adding "(Better!)" makes the name different, you're wrong.
That's like saying "MyMap V1.00" has a different name than "MyMap V2.00".
O, you didn't upload it again? What's this? An "Update"?
qft.
And if you cannot use the update-button, that means I don't want you to update it (I know, I'm not the easiest guy around).
I have rated this according to importance.
Obviously, triggers don't really matter a lot if the story and terrain are absolutely brilliant.
Triggers: very bad: waits instead of timers, leaks, inefficient. (1/5)
Terrain: blizzard cliffs for walls, do I have to say more? (2/15)
Story: I couldn't really tell what kind of story it was supposed to be, half of the cinematic existed out of "X minutes later", some plot changes were pretty predictable (John Galt's dead for example), the entire plot looked like some kind of cheap detective show with a few flaws (4/20)
Use of imports: TTS doesn't have emotions... not good, only the judge's voice was avarage for the first few words, the sound effects weren't bad though. (3/10)
Atmosphere (camera, filters, typo's, ...): the camera was very static, there was no good transition between camera movements (if the camera was moving), most of the time the camera movement existed out of 1 camera going to the other and back again.
There were a lot of annoying grammatical mistakes, especially the overdone comma, which you placed when it was absolutely not necessary.
The dream filter did fit in with the plot (2/10)
Total: 12/60 = 1/5 (20%)
And I've been pretty nice now...
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- Mar 17, 2009
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I said PLUS i used a different name. Ok scrach that But it is different! And i anyway deleted the other maps!!! I didnt know that when a map gets rejected then you must update it! I thought you must re upload it!
Its very different my other versions!
Really i dont understand why are you so aggressive with me!
Thank you for rating.
OK about the triggers. I am not a pro in World Editor!
about the Terrain. I didnt want to use inported terrain!
about the Story! Well you need to understand that Wild things is a movie! its not easy making it into warcraft 3 cinematic! (4/20) Is highly under-rated!
about the Use of imports. Thanks for the sound effects! But really, i dont have a microphone! atleast i had sounds!
about the Atmosphere (camera, filters, typo's, ...). You are right about the camera. You are right about the grammatical mistakes (but not so many). The komas were there because the TTS didnt sound good with out them!
Total: 12/60 = 1/5 (20%)
And I've been pretty nice now... ??? Come on! dont you think thats under-rated?? you are so evil !!
lolWhat if i say to you. That i plan a update??? Do you think thats a good idea?
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Yay, long comment... please read everything.
Something you probably didn't know: you can only soft-delete your maps, meaning it will be invisible for everyone but the map moderators and yourself.
I can still download the map, comment it, even undelete it, so the map is still in our database... (only people who have full permission over the maps section, such as map moderators can actually delete a map).
We don't want to have the same map more than once in our database, instead: we only want to have 1 version in it, the new one.
An RPG would be a good idea, but not "ye olde rpg", you need to have ideas that make you think, such as class changes, buying abilities, a new class choose method, a few items systems (class-bound, level-bound, rarity, ...).
Let your brain work for once (it didn't seem to work when creating this map) and just go for it.
Did you know that you only make progress by doing hard things? If you're an avarage guitar player and you keep playing avarage songs, you'll never get good, but if you play hard songs, you will get better.
It's the same for pretty much everything: when I started on my ORPG, I knew... basically nothing about mapping, only the very basics (around your level), because of that map, I learned how to code efficiently, how to remove leaks, what's important, what's not, how to judge yourself, etc...
The problem here is that, once the map is "done" (or when you're tired of it), you will realise it is crappy.
You know that everything you've done at the start isn't good and can be done in a better way, so you basically need to redo everything (and sometimes you do that and realise it could've been done even better afterwards), so it's a waste of time concerning the map itself.
Your mapping skills will improve quite a lot though...
If you do this, don't upload it!
No, re-uploading is a very rare case (when someone quits warcraft 3 and someone else takes over his project for example, the one who quit warcraft can't update it, so the one who received the project can re-upload the map, so he can update it).
Something you probably didn't know: you can only soft-delete your maps, meaning it will be invisible for everyone but the map moderators and yourself.
I can still download the map, comment it, even undelete it, so the map is still in our database... (only people who have full permission over the maps section, such as map moderators can actually delete a map).
Yes, but multi-uploading actually means "uploading multiple versions of the map", it doesn't matter if it's completely different or not, you have to update it, not re-upload.
We don't want to have the same map more than once in our database, instead: we only want to have 1 version in it, the new one.
- You don't really look like a pro at the world editor, you don't have to be one either... an avarage person could do a lot better.
- Importing tiles isn't what I meant: you could've used more dalaran (ruins) tiles to make it look better and used actual walls instead of blizzard cliffs - cliffs aren't supposed to be used like this (I hope).
- Never heard or seen the movie, but that isn't supposed to matter... there are a lot of LotR-cinematics, no matter how awesome LotR is, if those cinematics are bad, I reject them.
The plot doesn't seem very movie-like, it's more (as I have said before) a flawed detective show. - I understand that you don't have a mic, you don't need one either - you can ask people who do have one (and have a good accent), or you could use no sounds at all (though there is loss in sound effects in that case).
- As far as I know, you don't need to show the comma's in-game... it won't change the sound or anything, so you can leave them out.
No, really... I'm not being aggressive to you, you haven't seen any of my evil comments yetReally i dont understand why are you so aggressive with me!
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Come on! dont you think thats under-rated?? you are so evil !!
I would give you the advise to create a project that is extremely difficult...
An RPG would be a good idea, but not "ye olde rpg", you need to have ideas that make you think, such as class changes, buying abilities, a new class choose method, a few items systems (class-bound, level-bound, rarity, ...).
Let your brain work for once (it didn't seem to work when creating this map) and just go for it.
Did you know that you only make progress by doing hard things? If you're an avarage guitar player and you keep playing avarage songs, you'll never get good, but if you play hard songs, you will get better.
It's the same for pretty much everything: when I started on my ORPG, I knew... basically nothing about mapping, only the very basics (around your level), because of that map, I learned how to code efficiently, how to remove leaks, what's important, what's not, how to judge yourself, etc...
The problem here is that, once the map is "done" (or when you're tired of it), you will realise it is crappy.
You know that everything you've done at the start isn't good and can be done in a better way, so you basically need to redo everything (and sometimes you do that and realise it could've been done even better afterwards), so it's a waste of time concerning the map itself.
Your mapping skills will improve quite a lot though...
If you do this, don't upload it!
