Weldorans

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21:31, 6th Mar 2009 by bounty hunter2:
A decent melee map, lacking some more terrain work. It is balanced, symmetrical so that's not a problem. I didn't like the creep choice aswell, however: Approved with a 3/5 (Useful) rating.

You can find my full review Here. However it is my old review, my rating had changed since then.

 

[bounty hunter2]

Here is my rating and comment:

Rating system

1 - 10 points go on originality
1 - 10 points go on terrain
1 - 10 points go on bug free
1 - 10 points go on gameplay/fun factor
1 - 10 points go on lag
1 - 10 points go on balance
1 - 10 points go on drops
1 - 10 points go on proper submission and crediting
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That equals 80 points max.
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Voting system

Percent	Grade	Status
0 - 34%	1/5	Rejected
35 - 49%	1/5	Reviewed
50 - 64%	2/5	Approved
65 - 79%	3/5	Approved
80 - 89%	4/5	Approved
90 - 100%	5/5	Approved

The table may vary if needed.

Originality: 5/10 √
Simple melee, not much originality in it. I can mention the nice water addons, waygates, but nothing great.

Terrain: 5/10 √
Decent enough, however suggestions to improve:
- More grass, the dirt looks to plain
- The rock/flower thing seems unatural, it should be on the road too
- Less blizzard cliffs
- More height variation

Bug Free: 10/10 √
Runs fine.

Gameplay/Fun Factor: 6/10 √
Interesting for a 2v2 play. The waygates make it more interesting, and much easier to send troops on opponents. However I do not think that waygates don't need to be guarded.

Lag: 10/10 √
No lag.

Proper submission and crediting: 5/10 √
You could make up a story for the map, like Blizzard.

Balance: 6/10 √
You tried to make it symetrical it was good, better then I expected. The neutrals were placed okay, but not completely symetrical.

Drops: 9/10 √
Okay, item tables used, everything was proper.

In overall: 56 / 80
70% minimal 50% met.
For the hive grade: 2/5 I suggest this map for: Approved
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In overall it is a fine melee. It needs some terrain work, symetry work, but in the end it won't dissapoint you. It isn't Blizzards level, but it is fun to play at 2v2. Thus I don't see why this shouldn't be approved.

Good Luck, bounty hunter2
I might not be checking this topic for some time. If you have any questions about the review or you update the map and want me to check it again, feel free to PM me or Visitor message me at any time.

 

[Grave_Digger_]

Here is my rating and comment:

Rating system

1 - 10 points go on originality
1 - 10 points go on terrain
1 - 10 points go on bug free
1 - 10 points go on gameplay/fun factor
1 - 10 points go on lag
1 - 10 points go on balance
1 - 10 points go on drops
1 - 10 points go on proper submission and crediting
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That equals 80 points max.
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Voting system

Percent	Grade	Status
0 - 34%	1/5	Rejected
35 - 49%	1/5	Reviewed
50 - 64%	2/5	Approved
65 - 79%	3/5	Approved
80 - 89%	4/5	Approved
90 - 100%	5/5	Approved

The table may vary if needed.

Originality: 5/10 √
Simple melee, not much originality in it. I can mention the nice water addons, waygates, but nothing great.

Terrain: 5/10 √
Decent enough, however suggestions to improve:
- More grass, the dirt looks to plain
- The rock/flower thing seems unatural, it should be on the road too
- Less blizzard cliffs
- More height variation

Bug Free: 10/10 √
Runs fine.

Gameplay/Fun Factor: 6/10 √
Interesting for a 2v2 play. The waygates make it more interesting, and much easier to send troops on opponents. However I do not think that waygates don't need to be guarded.

Lag: 10/10 √
No lag.

Proper submission and crediting: 5/10 √
You could make up a story for the map, like Blizzard.

Balance: 6/10 √
You tried to make it symetrical it was good, better then I expected. The neutrals were placed okay, but not completely symetrical.

Drops: 9/10 √
Okay, item tables used, everything was proper.

In overall: 56 / 80
70% minimal 50% met.
For the hive grade: 3/5 I suggest this map for: Reviewed
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In overall it is a fine melee. It needs some terrain work, symetry work, but in the end it won't dissapoint you. It isn't Blizzards level, but it is fun to play at 2v2. Thus I don't see why this shouldn't be approved.

Good Luck, bounty hunter2
I might not be checking this topic for some time. If you have any questions about the review or you update the map and want me to check it again, feel free to PM me or Visitor message me at any time.

What do you mean with "it should have a story" It has a story in the description.

 

[bounty hunter2]

Sorry for not being clear enough. Post the story here, not enough info is visible.

 

[Grave_Digger_]

Sorry for not being clear enough. Post the story here, not enough info is visible.

Ahh, okay. So i should copy it and paste it here?

 

[bounty hunter2]

Indeed you should.

 

[Grave_Digger_]

Indeed you should.

Considder it done!