Web Designs

[Hoernchen]

Hey Guys,

recently I've started getting a bit into web designing. I learned PHP, MySQL, HTML, JavaScript, CSS and started making a few sites. I wanna try and sell one site to this australian hardware merchant, MSY, whose web site looks rather....crap....and not very professional.

Anyways, I made a web-design, and wanna know what you guys think, I attached a screenshot of the design here. The link to MSY's current website is MSY-The Name you can trust-More than 10 years in IT industry-Nationalwide branches serve you & always offer the best up today IT price.

Also, if anyone else here is a web-designer, care to show some of your work?

 

[TheDivineBoss]

Looks good, kinda professional-ish. Just add a little bit more, because the white makes it all empty. Just don't overdo it.

 

[Belgarath]

That looks like a HUGE upgrade to their current site. In its current form, it'd already be far better. I reckon that a site like that doesn't really need all that much detail, just a little more colour would be cool.

 

[Sansui]

Remember your C.R.A.P.

Anywho, the navigation is hard to see and the icons at the top do not make sense to me. Also if you are going to use those icons make the closer to the text as that will help bring them together as one element.

Also make your own icons. Never use icons that are floating around, that is a very bad practice.

Content needs serious work, I honestly never cared much about writing compelling content however it is a very important aspect and separates the poor from the good.

I would add some contrast bringing the content to the front above the background.



Just some of my class work that I threw together quickly.
3D Grunge
Project 2: Design Approach
project1

 

[Pyritie]

It looks a bit chunky. Also you might want to change the font of the text inside those boxes. Times doesn't go well with the rest of your theme.

Also I don't really like the color scheme. White+blue is very overdone.

Good job though.

 

[Mince]

Nice, very good, but i agree with everybody, little more color.