War Stomp

[Chaosy]

Looks like something else to me.

The upper part is a Chinese rice farming hat that covers the eyes of someone.
Underneath there is a gray mustache
Then brown skin
and lastly blonde beard

 

[Maxwell]

Must to agree with @Chaosy. It doesn't look like hoof. It doesn't look like foot. It just "something".
Also your Icon lack of shadows, higlights and your 'slam' sfx looks really flat.
Awaiting Update.

EDIT: You still haven't any shadows or hightlights on Icon.
Awaiting Update.

 

[Daffa]

I can somewhat see a horse stomp the ground, might need more details...

 

[Naze]

Looks cartoony but I can see it as a hoof stomping the ground. What Maxwell said about making a adding backlight (only to be able to differentiate the main object from the black background) still holds true imo.

You could try making a more meticulous texture work to get that "blizzard feel" next time:

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See that yours look cartoony-er because, in the blizzard one, the artist got a very small brush and kept making "stains" and details. This made the surface of his materials (fur, hoof) end up with a bit more of grunge/texture than the clean-looking hoof you got on yours. Good work nonetheless, yours does not look bad anyway

 

[Chaosy]

Clear improvement over the original.

 

[84chrome]

Looks cartoony but I can see it as a hoof stomping the ground. What Maxwell said about making a adding backlight (only to be able to differentiate the main object from the black background) still holds true imo.

You could try making a more meticulous texture work to get that "blizzard feel" next time:

X

See that yours look cartoony-er because, in the blizzard one, the artist got a very small brush and kept making "stains" and details. This made the surface of his materials (fur, hoof) end up with a bit more of grunge/texture than the clean-looking hoof you got on yours. Good work nonetheless, yours does not look bad anyway

Thanks for writing your comments.

 

[KILLCIDE]

If you plan on actually making changes instead of just bumping it, create a thread in Staff Contact.

 

[8512590215848]

Make it lighter please. Then get approved.

 

[8512590215848]

Approved.

 

[Null]

May I ask you to rename it, so it won t replace the already existing war stomp?

 

[Daffa]

May I ask you to rename it, so it won t replace the already existing war stomp?

You can rename the filename, and it would still work given proper paths are set.

 

[Null]

it is easyer for everibody if he does it.