Veteran Paladin

[SonsOfSami]

A lot of animations look like if he is wielding something in his right hand (as the original animations was holding the cloak), he should also wield the spear with 2 hands or wield a shield, there is also a texture problem in the front of the armour, and the hair is a bit weird.
I suggest that he should also be a bit bulky (for a more warcraftish look), and some effects in spell would be nice.
Edit: Nice to see that you added particles and fixed the uv wrap, but i still think he should wield a shield

 

[Elbadruhel]

It looks like a warrior/captain. But not a paladin at all. The model is good otherwise

 

[lord_Turin]

looks interesting!
but I would suggest beefing up the spear a bit and give him a buckler (small round shield).
then the animations would look better and it would make more sense historically!

 

[Gyrosphinx]

looks interesting!
but I would suggest beefing up the spear a bit and give him a buckler (small round shield).
then the animations would look better and it would make more sense historically!

Yes, I did note that the spear looks a bit small in game, so I'll try to beef it up. I've thought about a buckler, it would probably make sense.

Update: Added a steel buckler.

 

[lord_Turin]

nice, definitely looks better!

 

[StormKnight]

a bottle appears on his left hand when doing spell slam (because it's based on the brewmaster) please fix it, it looks horribly out of place both for a warrior and a paladin.

 

[Gyrosphinx]

a bottle appears on his left hand when doing spell slam (because it's based on the brewmaster) please fix it, it looks horribly out of place both for a warrior and a paladin.

Ehm, the bottle is placed there by me, on purpose...

 

[StormKnight]

Ehm, the bottle is placed there by me, on purpose...

oh ok, doesn't suit tho xd

but, maybe you have some plans with that so who am i to judge.

 

[Gyrosphinx]

If you like it better without the bottle, I can whip up a bottleless version in five minutes later tonight.

 

[StormKnight]

If you like it better without the bottle, I can whip up a bottleless version in five minutes later tonight.

i'm possibly not going to use it so if you don't feel like it it's totally fine.

here's a suggestion, add the version you have without the shield and with the bottle.
and then in the version with the shield remove the bottle.

 

[Elbadruhel]

The bottle appears there cause in Spell Slam he is drinking something to split it on the enemy. It sounds well used for me.

 

[Gyrosphinx]

I was thinking of an ability named "Holy Spirits" or something like that... Horrible pun, I know...

 

[Jaina Proudless]

Could you add some pupils to his model?

 

[General Frank]

You might want to give him some real pupils on the main model.