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Valdis' Inferno 1.1

Submitted by Vengeancekael
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Valdis' Inferno
By Vengeancekael
Terrain By -Kobas-


Info :

Valdis is the main character of my new cinematic series. He is a man who has done things for people which he now regrets.

Parts :

Part I [Finished]
Part II [In Dev]
(Part III [May be created, might not be needed])

Specifics :

Runtime: Will be announced soon
Musics used: 4 - Garry Schyman
Protection: None

Credits :

Tenebis
TDR


Changelog :

1.0: First Released Version
1.1: Terrain drastically improved by -Kobas-

Special Thanks :

ap0calypse
Hemlock


Youtube :

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CQUGysD9zKw


Website :

Link

Keywords:
cinematic, valdis, inferno, vengeancekael
Contents

Valdis' Inferno 1.1 (Map)

Reviews
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15:40, 31st Jul 2010 ap0calypse: Approved
  1. 15:40, 31st Jul 2010
    ap0calypse: Approved
     
  2. Vengeancekael

    Vengeancekael

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    w00t the description is screwed up :D
    I'll fix the description with the next update.
     
  3. -Kobas-

    -Kobas-

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    Ah you will never learn to make good one :razz: :xxd:

    Btw dl and testing, I must check this :thumbs_up:

    EDIT: Ok lets see:

    Terrain isn't best :razz:
    Story looks good for now :gg:
    3 Special Effects (2 scenes with slow motion and one at the end with devil)
    Last only two or tree min :xxd:

    Hey man I know you can do better than this. -> I will send you small surprise check mail tomorrow :xxd:
     
  4. Vengeancekael

    Vengeancekael

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    :OOOOO
    Holy mother of Keji, that's some freaky terrain :D Thx, will update the map now.
    Why can't i terrain like you xD
    Edit: Updated, what the heck is wrong with the description!!!!
     
    Last edited: Apr 10, 2010
  5. -Kobas-

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    Omg don't say I need to make description also :razz:
    P.S. You are description dude after all :xxd:
     
  6. Vengeancekael

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    nono, i'll fix it^^
     
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    Cool :thumbs_up:
    Hey add pictures, your cinematic look fine now :razz:
     
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    Testing...

    [Edit]

    Okay tested it.
    First: put your description in [ box=Description] [ /box] tags, so it's centered.

    Then about the cinematic:
    A bit boring, but well, what do you want from an introduction-part? :p
    Terrain was quite good, but there were some floating doodads like grass, flowers etc.
    The child died before valdis finished his attack. It looked like the child would avoid his attack :p
    Same with the woman. Valdis' sword doesn't touch the woman.
    You wrote: Lucer. Did you mean Lucifer?
    At the beginning, with the text showing up: Remove some of the text. Some of it just repeats, and that takes unnecessary time.
    And one thing: I don't get why the devil comes out of a spring which looks holy with the light and the nice-looking flowers/grass around it.
    Story was okay I think.

    Hope you'll finish your next part soon, and I hope it will contain more suspense :D
     
  9. Vengeancekael

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    But what about spoilers :p
    Edit:
    Kobas' fault xD Nah jk.
    Sometimes it does and sometimes it doesn't, it's because his animation "attack" has several animations.
    No, it's Lucer, he's the one who gave him his tasks.
    Neva! :D
    No the spring is holy, where the gods can be called, and then when he called the dark gods, one of their servants appeared to take him to hell and the fountain became dark.
    Edit: Description fixed.
    Edit: Also, this cinematic series will only feature 3 parts.
     
    Last edited: Apr 10, 2010
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    Well, i watched this cinematic yesterday. The name first reminds me of "Dante's Inferno", but we'll see...

    It was a quite good one, If this is your first, everything can go better.
    But you have to practise that.

    But, for the first look, a nice work.

    :thumbs_up:
     
  11. Vengeancekael

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    rofl this isn't my first cinematic, probably my eighth, besides this is an intro.
     
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    okk....

    this is bad for a part 1 ...
    a bad begin
    and its to short for a serie part..
    u written next all 10 secs "The Beginning"
    and as he call the "dark god" he should make a noob animaiton like spell throw
    try to never stop the camera becuz its like a lagg, a frozen screen
    and why he said at end Dark gods and at begin just god :S?

    well 3/5 :S
     
  13. Vengeancekael

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    This is an intro, part 2 will be much longer and of better quality.
    he did do " a noob animation" <.<
    Too much movement is bad, sometimes it should pause a little.
    There he says that all the gods should forgive him, but in the end, he wants the dark gods to punish him, because they will do so "brutally".
     
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    How did you come across the name Valdis?

    You do know there is a game named Dugeon Siege 2 (Dugeon Siege:Broken World) that has that in it.
     
    Last edited: May 3, 2010
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    yes i know and i have played dungeon siege + broken world. It's just a name which fits the character.
     
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    Watched the youtube version, not bad I just hated the long bit at the beginning, waiting for him to say something xD

    B there more?
     
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    you surely know there is the action call SetUnitAnimationByIndex( unit name, number ) who make an precise animation without variation and randomness so please update.
     
  18. deepstrasz

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    Nothing's happening in the first minute... it's just a photoshoot.
    The child wasn't even touched by that sword.

    There's little that's actually going on and it's pretty much boring and uninteresting.