Valdis' Inferno 1.1

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Valdis' Inferno
By Vengeancekael
Terrain By -Kobas-


Info :

Valdis is the main character of my new cinematic series. He is a man who has done things for people which he now regrets.

Parts :

Part I [Finished]
Part II [In Dev]
(Part III [May be created, might not be needed])

Specifics :

Runtime: Will be announced soon
Musics used: 4 - Garry Schyman
Protection: None

Credits :

Tenebis
TDR


Changelog :

1.0: First Released Version
1.1: Terrain drastically improved by -Kobas-

Special Thanks :

ap0calypse
Hemlock


Youtube :


Website :

Link

Keywords:
cinematic, valdis, inferno, vengeancekael
Contents

Valdis' Inferno 1.1 (Map)

Reviews
15:40, 31st Jul 2010 ap0calypse: Approved
Ah you will never learn to make good one :razz: :xxd:

Btw dl and testing, I must check this :thumbs_up:

EDIT: Ok lets see:

Terrain isn't best :razz:
Story looks good for now :gg:
3 Special Effects (2 scenes with slow motion and one at the end with devil)
Last only two or tree min :xxd:

Hey man I know you can do better than this. -> I will send you small surprise check mail tomorrow :xxd:
 
Testing...

[Edit]

Okay tested it.
First: put your description in [ box=Description] [ /box] tags, so it's centered.

Then about the cinematic:
A bit boring, but well, what do you want from an introduction-part? :p
Terrain was quite good, but there were some floating doodads like grass, flowers etc.
The child died before valdis finished his attack. It looked like the child would avoid his attack :p
Same with the woman. Valdis' sword doesn't touch the woman.
You wrote: Lucer. Did you mean Lucifer?
At the beginning, with the text showing up: Remove some of the text. Some of it just repeats, and that takes unnecessary time.
And one thing: I don't get why the devil comes out of a spring which looks holy with the light and the nice-looking flowers/grass around it.
Story was okay I think.

Hope you'll finish your next part soon, and I hope it will contain more suspense :D
 
Cool :thumbs_up:
Hey add pictures, your cinematic look fine now :razz:
But what about spoilers :p
Edit:
Terrain was quite good, but there were some floating doodads like grass, flowers etc.
Kobas' fault xD Nah jk.
The child died before valdis finished his attack. It looked like the child would avoid his attack :p
Same with the woman. Valdis' sword doesn't touch the woman.
Sometimes it does and sometimes it doesn't, it's because his animation "attack" has several animations.
You wrote: Lucer. Did you mean Lucifer?
No, it's Lucer, he's the one who gave him his tasks.
At the beginning, with the text showing up: Remove some of the text. Some of it just repeats, and that takes unnecessary time.
Neva! :D
And one thing: I don't get why the devil comes out of a spring which looks holy with the light and the nice-looking flowers/grass around it.
No the spring is holy, where the gods can be called, and then when he called the dark gods, one of their servants appeared to take him to hell and the fountain became dark.
Edit: Description fixed.
Edit: Also, this cinematic series will only feature 3 parts.
 
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Level 8
Joined
Nov 29, 2008
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Well, i watched this cinematic yesterday. The name first reminds me of "Dante's Inferno", but we'll see...

It was a quite good one, If this is your first, everything can go better.
But you have to practise that.

But, for the first look, a nice work.

:thumbs_up:
 
Level 5
Joined
Feb 20, 2010
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okk....

this is bad for a part 1 ...
a bad begin
and its to short for a serie part..
u written next all 10 secs "The Beginning"
and as he call the "dark god" he should make a noob animaiton like spell throw
try to never stop the camera becuz its like a lagg, a frozen screen
and why he said at end Dark gods and at begin just god :S?

well 3/5 :S
 
Level 12
Joined
Sep 28, 2011
Messages
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Sometimes it does and sometimes it doesn't, it's because his animation "attack" has several animations.
you surely know there is the action call SetUnitAnimationByIndex( unit name, number ) who make an precise animation without variation and randomness so please update.
 
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