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Approve this! i give it a 4.80/5 for originiallity.
why .20 off?
for 0.10, the game text is too long. its boring waiting 10 seconds for the next message.
for another 0.10, the begginning the wife text is too fast, you cant even read it.
The fountain is bitten in the ground. Terrible description at HIVE. Sometimes texts are unreadable. Because it is stupid (funny in some way) I give 3/5.
Very good cinematic with some good use of sound.
I loved the shadow effect when the Castle approached them.
The sheep sounds effects sounded kinda bad, make them more erratic.
When the sheep bombing thing ended, one sheep just stayed there for about a second...
The timing can be better, some bits get a little bit boring, such as the pan and the hobo bit.
The ending is a bit awkward.
4/5 Voted for Approval
Lol thanks for the input guys, I didn't intend this to be perfect, I totally agree with most of your comments, if I was to do modify it, I would totally make all of those changes, but I was just creating random dialog/effects to test HOW they work, not making a cinematic from the start lol.
Thanks again,
~Gloom
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