The Lost Land

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Comment - Shar Dundred's Reviewhttp://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/maps-564/lost-land-262925/#post2656536​

Verdict - Rejected, 1/5​

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[LordDz]

Go to Scenario -> Map Description and change the mapname.
The terrain has a few good spots (the shrubbery grass), but the rest really needs improvement.

 

[Eldin Gunslinger]

Go to Scenario -> Map Description and change the mapname.
The terrain has a few good spots (the shrubbery grass), but the rest really needs improvement.

I make the map for 4 hours and i got bored so the other are not nice

Go to Scenario -> Map Description and change the mapname.
The terrain has a few good spots (the shrubbery grass), but the rest really needs improvement.

I will add some Terrain and Doodad's

 

[Justas]

I will add some Terrain and Doodad's

Don't double post , its forbidden by the site. Use Edit button instead .
Also your template needs lots of improvement . 4Hours isn't enough for a normal map , unless its very small ,then maybe . Take more time into your map creation , add little details that will show that your map is great.

 

[Eldin Gunslinger]

Don't double post , its forbidden by the site. Use Edit button instead .
Also your template needs lots of improvement . 4Hours isn't enough for a normal map , unless its very small ,then maybe . Take more time into your map creation , add little details that will show that your map is great.

Thanks for the advice

 

[Shar Dundred]

Map: The Lost Land
Version: 1

Review
by Shar Dundred

Terrain

It's quite obvious that you're new when it comes to mapping/terraining but anyway: The terrain is just awful. I'll just mention a few of the things I came across. Perhaps you can improve this, after all. The trees at the map borders are just bad. They are in one line, like an army, not like a real forest. The tiles aren't placed in a good way, you used only one kind of grass in most areas. There's also too many map space filled with nothing but a few trees. Almost no doodads besides trees in most areas. The World Tree seems to be completely misplaced. Some of the rocks at the waterfall are just flying in the air. I'd suggest putting the naga area completely under water, not just the place where Vashj is standing. This terrain needs lots of improvement before it can be approved. As Justas mentioned, you need to work much longer on your maps. 1/5

Overall

You have some nice ideas but still lack the knowledge to make them become real. In its current state, there's no way to approve this map. You'll have to test and learn more. If you want to make this map approvable, improve the terrain as mentioned before and take a closer look at the tutorials. Click Click Click Also, you put way too much different stuff on one map. Try to concentrate on only one thing with your first map - perhaps just a village with forest or a volcano area, so you can fully concentrate on this one. You can create other template maps later as well. 1/5 Vote for rejection