The Iron Hand Tournament

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Vengeancekael: Private Message
Date: 2012/Feb/18 14:07:05

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Lacking Description: Template

Other:
Check out the tutorials section: Tutorials
Check out the Map Development Section: Map Development Section
Check out the World Editor Help Zone (Trigger issues, object editor, overall WE issues): WE Help Zone
Comment: *Too low quality camera work
*It hurts to read the dialogue, DON'T USE CAPITAL LETTERS FOR EACH WORD

The cinematic overall has a way too low quality, check out some tutorials first.
Also read sonofjay's comment, he's said almost everything I wanted to.
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[sonofjay]

Hahaha that is funny Hahahaha asking for rep per download??? hahaha.

Let us see if you deserve a rep.. Downloading

 

[Xx_p0g1_xX]

Hahaha that is funny Hahahaha asking for rep per download??? hahaha.

Let us see if you deserve a rep.. Downloading

Its Just If You want to give me.... And I Updated the Description Now no more Asking For Rep per Download

 

[sonofjay]

Okay this is my review of this map

Good Thing:

I don't really know if this map have a good thing.

Bad Thing(Should be improve if you want your map to be accepted)

1.) Okay this is a cinematic so let us start on your story I go straight on you, your cinematic doesn't really have a good story, actually it is boring, Cairne just beat all his enemies, that's all nothing special, I can make this cinematic in only a minute.

2.) Well if you can't really improve the 1st one I mention you should not continue reading this anymore.

Okay you still continue reading.

About the terrain, nothing really special on your terrain, it just a flat one and just putted some trees and some units to fill the emptiness.

Suggestion if you want to make your terrain interesting then I recommend you to make a arena. Here I will make a picture for as a example.

Example Terrain

See that terrain? It only took me 2mins to do it, then what if It takes me more time making a arena? then that arena will look amazing.

3.) Other things

*The cinematic doesn't have a good special effect.

Special effects is not really required on a cinematic, as long as the story and terrains covers it all, but making special effect would make the environment more special.

*You didn't time your actions correctly. One of this occur at the start where Samuro attack Cairne right at the start. It doesn't give the watchers to realize what the hell is happening? maybe a announcer to start the fight...

*NO STORY HAPPENS BEFORE THE FIGHT!? This cinematic would be more interesting if you make the story longer, and the part where you should add more story(work) is the start. You know the basic *start-climax- end* of a movie.

There is still alot of things that i wanted to say but those are enough to rate your map 1/5

You need to give more effort, creativity and time to make this cinematic more special.

 

[Xx_p0g1_xX]

Hey Thanks Sonofjay Yeah I would Really Want ThE arena But The thing is I want the Arena To be big But I haven't found some good doodads to fill the arena and Yeah The map Is Lame Gonna update it Sometime

 

[sonofjay]

If you can't find doodads that will fit your arena then imrpovise, playing with doodads and changing their models to your liking will never hurt you.

And that arena that I made, I made it on your map...

 

[Xx_p0g1_xX]

If you can't find doodads that will fit your arena then imrpovise, playing with doodads and changing their models to your liking will never hurt you.

And that arena that I made, I made it on your map...

I know this will sound like I'am a noob but I dont know how to Make models..

 

[sonofjay]

I know this will sound like I'am a noob but I dont know how to Make models..

You don't need to create your own model blizzards provided some and you can also download models created by hive members click here also the models used by units and buildings can also use as doodads models just go to object editor, doodad or destructible tab, and find art-model file then change the model for your liking and if you want to request a doodad then go here or go to this workshop by Eubz

 

[Xx_p0g1_xX]

thanks again........

 

[Vengeancekael]

*Too low quality camera work
*It hurts to read the dialogue, DON'T USE CAPITAL LETTERS FOR EACH WORD

The cinematic overall has a way too low quality, check out some tutorials first.
Also read sonofjay's comment, he's said almost everything I wanted to.

Rejected.