The Fallen king( Assassins City )

[Moderator]

12:24, 21st Aug 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

 

[Neilghost]

ahahah damn it download it now im joking its awsome trust me u guys will enjoy

 

[x3GlikE]

Hmm hope so... testing it tonight tell you how it is later....kk

 

[Darkzealot_128]

Gonna test, its not looking good right now with the bad description and no map preview.

Edit: Awful terrain, and also, is this a custom game or a melee map? Seriously. Also, there is a million english mistakes, as well as that this map is also boring and it looks like you didn't put much work into it. 1/5 +vote for rejection

 

[takakenji]

two words.

FUCKING.

AMAZING.

 

[light bolt30]

two words.

FUCKING.

AMAZING.

I LOVE YOUR SARCASM!!!

Anyways from the preview the terrain looks awful and your description needs improve as it is breaking the Hive's rules; use these BB Codes to help you.

 

[x3GlikE]

Hmm I don't feel like testing this now...

 

[Dethadow]

Poor Terrain - No doodads
Poor Story - No background story, no work put into it (who, when, what, where, why, how?)
Poor triggers - Too many triggers, and too many of them are useless, i can't see the timer
Poor tooltips - "Tooltip missing", no description, wrong tooltip/description
Poor map size - 2.2mb for a lot of custom models, gameplay isn't well enough
Poor dialogue - Lots of grammar mistakes, dialogue is too long (time)
Poor choice of models - Models don't fit for many of them.... i mean seriously, peasants with swords?
Bad balance: it's easy to win... very easy... and i can be the fallen king too ==.....

I am sorry. but I'm voting for Rejection and 1/5

Please put more work into it before uploading to hiveworkshop

 

[Krl70]

*Facepalm* Why did they make mapping this easy.

Now, for the map, you need to do a lot of work, and a little more. Go work on your grammar, do some tutorials, in my opinion you aren't quite ready for THW yet.

P.S: use .'s and ,'s

 

[Neilghost]

thanks for the advice but ill be honest i hadly put in any work but ill try better next time on my new Assassins Map
ill even try a better story line if it helps)):

 

[Dethadow]

Try Hiveworkshop tutorials, they are there for a reason . If you read most of them, and you work hard, a decent map could be easily made. There are many tutorials on how to write a background story, etc...