the Conferious cliffs !

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im not sure about this one... i dont like way this one turned out.

can people give me comments and feedback, especially tips on how to make it look better...
 

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ya u have done better i thought this 1 was ok compared 2 others i do like the sky and sun just other parts are meh
 
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I am never really much of a fan of these types of shots (there never really is much actual terraining done, usually just really cool skies). But that aside, the trees growing on the rocks on the right side need to be removed. A lone wolf semi-faded out on top of the right cliff would look good I think, but I am not sure if it would clash with your house on the left.

Also, there are two or three trees on the right that it looks like you can see the 'bottom' of them.
 
TREES ARE GROWING ON THE ROCKS.

Nonsense.

They grow on rocks. Are you telling me you've never seen trees growing out of rocky ground? Rock on the surface doesn't mean rock all the way through.

IMO, a bit too orange. Especially the second cliff, maybe make the Z start a bit more and the z end a little less. Also, the trees up front just end suddenly, you should make them go on a little. Also, your pictures are so damn tiny :/... what's your screen resolution?
 
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Cool terrain, there is just a few things that irritate me.

For one the trees in the foreground is far too "spammy" I mean their all the same model and size. Second, on the cliff to the far right, the trees at the edge just suddenly stops growing, which seem unatural, the tree-line should go all the way along the cliff. And at last, the cliff seem a bit TOO bright to me, I would consider darkening it a bit.

Oh, and yeah. I can confirm that trees grow on rock as well :p I am fucking climbing in the mountains in my spare time >.>
 
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ahh thanks all, i know whats wrong with it now...
ill fix it up, hopefully itll be better.


and lmaoo about the trees growing on rocks thing lmao

BTw, i have the smallest resolution created ( i think its 1160 by 720 .... its small compared to other resolutions, sorry haha )
 
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