The Cinematic

This is my very 1st cinematic map. Im a noob at triggers and such and just kinda learning. Please watch it and tell me what i could improve... and maybe a few tips... thnks much. I might make some other one that is longer in the near future.
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13:22, 14th May 2008 Firelord213: The cinematic seems to work and is a good cinematic for being your first one. You could add more actions too the cinematic and could give more information about why they are having a battle there and so on...
13:22, 14th May 2008
Firelord213:
The cinematic seems to work and is a good cinematic for being your first one.
You could add more actions too the cinematic and could give more information about why they are having a battle there and so on.
*Approved*
 
ok dude the cinematic viewer arrived; let me have ah look;

hmmm...hmmmmm....
ye that's what i call simple xD

so there is nothing more to say about it ^^
just an average first work :D
next time include :terrain/doodads/different cameras/story
and we ll get a great cinematic ;D

i will not rate it cos it's just a try i guess how triggers work etc
so keep on working 'n message me for your next works - i love cinematics :D

anyway i ll maybe upload my first cinematic soon - feel free to watch it
and mb u'll learn some about how to work with the camera etc

ps: browse the hiveworkshop cinematic maps for:
final frenzy
and the T.S.O.F teaser
they r just great 10/10 works
 
First off that was pretty good for your first cinematic. Second off the camera movments were nice and smooth but some things I didn't like were the camera shake was to violent and you spelled believers wrong. If you want help search through the cinematic maps on hive.
 
Well its just need some kind of story.
Its really nice for being your first map.
But who was the big metal guy?
Was he ???? or do he have a name?
10/10 Keep up the good work (with a story)
 
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