Temple Battle New Journey

[anonymousmaster]

awesome Ill rate 5/5

 

[trebla ratilla]

awesome Ill rate 5/5

thank you

 

[Rufus]

Sorry man.
Even though your map looks awesome, models and resources from other games are not allowed. You need to replace those, and add proper warcraft models instead.

 

[deepstrasz]

-minions have spawned, minions have spawned, minions have spawned, minions have spawned, minions have spawned, minions have spawned..........
-breath of fire can be cast on towers
-towers shouldn't prioritize heroes
-spells need proper description with the exact amount of damage/slow/whatever per level
-buying the Falcon automatically transforms it into the Divine
-Vladimir should be marked red on the map
-the Pandaren Brewmaster is overpowered; holy criticals
-rampage + legendary at the same time? Goes on like that
-since there are only two lanes I suggest the main building becoming vulnerable after all towers are destroyed on every lane
-acquiring gold from Vladimir writes the text: name of player has Divine
-the troll batrider hero is absolutely moving too fast
-kind of a DotA ripoff (especially items)

2.5/5. Needs proper balancing among others.

 

[trebla ratilla]

-minions have spawned, minions have spawned, minions have spawned, minions have spawned, minions have spawned, minions have spawned..........
-breath of fire can be cast on towers
-towers shouldn't prioritize heroes
-spells need proper description with the exact amount of damage/slow/whatever per level
-buying the Falcon automatically transforms it into the Divine
-Vladimir should be marked red on the map
-the Pandaren Brewmaster is overpowered; holy criticals
-rampage + legendary at the same time? Goes on like that
-since there are only two lanes I suggest the main building becoming vulnerable after all towers are destroyed on every lane
-acquiring gold from Vladimir writes the text: name of player has Divine
-the troll batrider hero is absolutely moving too fast
-kind of a DotA ripoff (especially items)

2.5/5. Needs proper balancing among others.

All done no more changes, Tempel Battle been update!!! Enjoy playing, if there's any feedback just message me or comment here. thanks BTW thanks for the feedbackdeepstrasz har har har

 

[Rufus]

Your credit list must include where the models come from. Perhaps you have credited the person who ripped the model, but you haven't credited for example League of Legends for the turret models.
This must be in the credits list!

Just a warning also: You should know that if a game from which you have taken a model says that you are not allowed to use their resources, we must take it down right away.

 

[trebla ratilla]

Your credit list must include where the models come from. Perhaps you have credited the person who ripped the model, but you haven't credited for example League of Legends for the turret models.
This must be in the credits list!

Just a warning also: You should know that if a game from which you have taken a model says that you are not allowed to use their resources, we must take it down right away.

done update. there you go

 

[Rufus]

Approved.
A cool AoS map with loads of imported models, and well executed special effects.
Just attaching my previous warning to this post aswell: You should know that if a game from which you have taken a model says that you are not allowed to use their resources, we must take it down right away.

If you want more reviews, try joining the Grand Review Exchange.

 

[Deleted member 247165]

Well.....I appreciate the high rating on my AoS, but I must be honest to you here.
What you tried to make in this MOBA, was to fusion DotA 1 with elements from League of Legends. I say, why bothering to use elements from LoL, while you could have simply used the awesome models, those awesome people create and upload them here. No, instead you used the ugly cartoonish like models from League of Legends.
Spells are ok but excepting their appealing description, most of them are basically the same Warcraft 3 spells, edited a bit. Also, a tip for you: I played Skeletal Mage and his third skill, that passive with "life stealing" attacks is not working. Wanna know why? Because the basic Vampiric Aura of the Dreadlord works only for melee units and heroes, while the Skeletal Mage is a ranged one, that skill wont restore his life upon attacking enemy units or heroes.
Terrain... I dont say you cant make a beautiful terrain on a plain one, but yours really needs a big improvement! On the lanes, there must be trees on both the right side and the left side. The jungle merged with the middle lane or something you did and confused me, is really wrong. Separate the middle lane from the jungling camps. Creeps spawned from the bases, give a very small amount of experience. Normally, and in every MOBA/AOS, the first wave must always level up a single hero slaying them.
I'll give you a 4/5 because I know you can do something more than this. An advice for you: Stop inspiring from LoL, you'll gen nothing but an imbalanced MOBA. In League of Legends, more than 70% of the heroes are so overpowered that only a single normal spell can wipe out 3 enemy heroes at once. Wanna have an example of a good moba? Try analizing Heroes of Newerth and Smite

 

[trebla ratilla]

Well.....I appreciate the high rating on my AoS, but I must be honest to you here.
What you tried to make in this MOBA, was to fusion DotA 1 with elements from League of Legends. I say, why bothering to use elements from LoL, while you could have simply used the awesome models, those awesome people create and upload them here. No, instead you used the ugly cartoonish like models from League of Legends.
Spells are ok but excepting their appealing description, most of them are basically the same Warcraft 3 spells, edited a bit. Also, a tip for you: I played Skeletal Mage and his third skill, that passive with "life stealing" attacks is not working. Wanna know why? Because the basic Vampiric Aura of the Dreadlord works only for melee units and heroes, while the Skeletal Mage is a ranged one, that skill wont restore his life upon attacking enemy units or heroes.
Terrain... I dont say you cant make a beautiful terrain on a plain one, but yours really needs a big improvement! On the lanes, there must be trees on both the right side and the left side. The jungle merged with the middle lane or something you did and confused me, is really wrong. Separate the middle lane from the jungling camps. Creeps spawned from the bases, give a very small amount of experience. Normally, and in every MOBA/AOS, the first wave must always level up a single hero slaying them.
I'll give you a 4/5 because I know you can do something more than this. An advice for you: Stop inspiring from LoL, you'll gen nothing but an imbalanced MOBA. In League of Legends, more than 70% of the heroes are so overpowered that only a single normal spell can wipe out 3 enemy heroes at once. Wanna have an example of a good moba? Try analizing Heroes of Newerth and Smite

BTW, thanks for the feedback but i use the LOL turret models because it's nice, i think it's really fit the terrain design, the terrain design is not made by me i dowloaded the map template and this game is only have two lanes.

 

[Deleted member 247165]

You should work more on your terrain . and balance the gameplay

 

[King_of_Doom_1]

Well Wtii just sold me on this map, gonna check it out!

 

[trebla ratilla]

Update now new version 2.2
if you find some bugs and feedback just feel free to send message or comment here Good Luck have fun

 

[kirbyfish]

Noice!

 

[Lord_Marrowgrath]

I played your map and I want to review it.

Terrain: 4/5

+Looks Beautiful. It reminds me Leauge of Legends Template.
-Middle lane is so wide.
-Jungle are open plain.

Heroes: 3/5

+there are 40+ heroes to explore.
-Early game abilities so weak to kill enemy.
-On late game, everyone become auto-attack fighter.
-Havent seen gui/jass spell yet. So many of them based on standart abilities.

Items: 3/5

+So many smilar items from dota. It helps to buy some items.
-There are no guide for items. It become confusing for new players.
-Rainbow Fish too powerful. It restores 500 hp instant.

Gameplay: 4/5

+Game based on teamfights. You cant kill enemy players alone.
+AI is very good to play it on single player.
-Early game is boring. Abilities are too weak to do early-pvp

Overall: 14/20

I suggest to import some unique abilities and buff all spells for heroes. I enjoyed very much. But, it needs improve

 

[trebla ratilla]

I played your map and I want to review it.

Terrain: 4/5

+Looks Beautiful. It reminds me Leauge of Legends Template.
-Middle lane is so wide.
-Jungle are open plain.

Heroes: 3/5

+there are 40+ heroes to explore.
-Early game abilities so weak to kill enemy.
-On late game, everyone become auto-attack fighter.
-Havent seen gui/jass spell yet. So many of them based on standart abilities.

Items: 3/5

+So many smilar items from dota. It helps to buy some items.
-There are no guide for items. It become confusing for new players.
-Rainbow Fish too powerful. It restores 500 hp instant.

Gameplay: 4/5

+Game based on teamfights. You cant kill enemy players alone.
+AI is very good to play it on single player.
-Early game is boring. Abilities are too weak to do early-pvp

Overall: 14/20

I suggest to import some unique abilities and buff all spells for heroes. I enjoyed very much. But, it needs improve

Thank you for a very nice feedback
@Lord_Marrowgrath
-there's a guide for buying an items ex. Bottle of Love Requires : wand of sorcerer ( Villager 1) so you need to buy the required item in villager 1
-there are some gui/jass spell, use keeper of the grove Q spell, bomb planter R spell, Mine Digger R spell, Goddess of the Sea E Passive spell but only few of them are gui/jass spell. I use many standard abilities so that i can reduce some lags and remove memory leaks
-i'll change spell damage so that in early games it will kill enemy easily
-i'll gonna decorate the Jungle Area and reduce the wide of the middle lane
-i'll reduce Rainbow Fish restoration to 200 hp isntant
BTW, thank you for the feedback i love it, i'll change what you mention for the next version

@kirbyfish thanks

 

[Lord_Marrowgrath]

Thank you for a very nice feedback
@Lord_Marrowgrath
-there's a guide for buying an items ex. Bottle of Love Requires : wand of sorcerer ( Villager 1) so you need to buy the required item in villager 1
-there are some gui/jass spell, use keeper of the grove Q spell, bomb planter R spell, Mine Digger R spell, Goddess of the Sea E Passive spell but only few of them are gui/jass spell. I use many standard abilities so that i can reduce some lags and remove memory leaks
-i'll change spell damage so that in early games it will kill enemy easily
-i'll gonna decorate the Jungle Area and reduce the wide of the middle lane
-i'll reduce Rainbow Fish restoration to 200 hp isntant
BTW, thank you for the feedback i love it, i'll change what you mention for the next version

@kirbyfish thanks

Good to hear it friend.

 

[BoleSrbin023]

really good map and interesting set of heroes. 5/5

 

[trebla ratilla]

really good map and interesting set of heroes. 5/5

thanks @BoleSrbin023 ! i'll add more heroes, upgrade more items and fix heroes skill. hope you enjoy the next update

 

[CampScouter]

Nice work Dude! , very awesome. I wish I could create maps like that

 

[trebla ratilla]

Nice work Dude! , very awesome. I wish I could create maps like that

yes you can just believe yourself friend! not only this kind of game but many more

EDIT : thanks

 

[CampScouter]

Dude, good luck

 

[trebla ratilla]

Dude, good luck

thanks

 

[CampScouter]

Hahahaha, Please update Temple Battle

 

[Panda]

Looks pretty nice, some of the models are cool looking.. I have a similar hero defense map I've been creating for 3 years now.

 

[Deleted member 247165]

It deserves 5/5 now. Based on the improvements. Still you can make some more cooler spells for the heroes.

 

[trebla ratilla]

Looks pretty nice, some of the models are cool looking.. I have a similar hero defense map I've been creating for 3 years now.

thanks, sir panda. oh! what kind of map is that? can i play it

Edit : i think "The Last Ancients 3.9 (Hero Defense)". i like the name of the game. nice one and good work

It deserves 5/5 now. Based on the improvements. Still you can make some more cooler spells for the heroes.

thanks, alxen. yeah.. i'll add more GUI triggers spell on it but not so much big spell just like normal means same in World Editor default spell but add something nice effect on it example : storm bolt make it AOE damage ..

Edit : if someone already found the easter egg in TB, good job. all my maps have easter egg specially Protect your ally..that's all no special

 

[CampScouter]

YIPPPPEEEEE!!!!!

Temple Battle New Journey v. 1.1.6

I've been waiting for this Trebla, thanks for updating it! Good reworks on the terrain, btw

And thanks for nerfing the Incinerate's damage

 

[Panda]

thanks, sir panda. oh! what kind of map is that? can i play it

Edit : i think "The Last Ancients 3.9 (Hero Defense)". i like the name of the game. nice one and good work

It will be out next year sometime I'm not sure yet, but it is nice!

 

[trebla ratilla]

It will be out next year sometime I'm not sure yet, but it is nice!

I know you can make it nice. your an artist sir . hope you will finish it

 

[kirbyfish]

^noice nilaro ko yung mapa mo sobrang astig lalo na sa mga karakter ang astig yung abilidad pero kunting improve lang (*_*)

 

[trebla ratilla]

^noice nilaro ko yung mapa mo sobrang astig lalo na sa mga karakter ang astig yung abilidad pero kunting improve lang (*_*)

oh! thank you for the feedback :3 your a pinoy right ? hahah

 

[CampScouter]

MAP DESCRIPTION REVIEW by CampScouter
Lol. I think this would help you, and yes, I want to review it xD

I have a suggestion to you. Maybe in your next update changelog,
-You will include the name of the hero then the ability
-Categorize them according to the update
-Add values to changes that includes numbers/integers/reals
-If you are adding a hero, include it's abilities


Example: (!These are not accurate informations!)

Spoiler: Here you Go

v. 1.1.6 changelogs:

GENERAL:

Redecorated the terrain a little bit

HEROES:

[BUFFS]

Increased [Hero Name]'s Incinerate damage from 20/30/40 to 30/40/50

Decreased cooldown of [Hero Name]'s Eye of the Storm from 15/10/5 to 10/5/2.5

Decreased cooldown of [Hero Name]'s Destruction launcher from 25/10/15 to 20/15/10

[NERFS]

Decreased [Damage, Cooldown, Damage, etc.] of [Hero Name]'s [Ability Name] from 10/20/30 to 5/10/15

NEW HERO!
(Thanks @Rheiko for this)

First Ability Here

Second Ability Here

Third Ability Here

Ultimate Ability Here

Lore

Icon
Description : ...

Icon
Description : ...

Icon link
Description : ...

Icon link
Description : ...

What is his/her lore?

BUGS/ERRORS:
(If the bug is specified)

Fixed a bug where [What happens with that bug]
(If it is a minor bug)

Fixed a minor [Trigger/Terrain/Ability/Value/Model/Icon, etc.] bug. (Note: If it is related to a hero, specify the name of the hero)
(If it is fatal bug, specified)

Fixed a fatal bug that causes [What does it do and on what particular sector in the map]
[/SPOLER]

And if you just edited the same version, maybe you can put letter on it? like if you edited v.1.1.6 on September 16,2017 and revised it today, it will look like this: v.1.1.6b

Because, revision of current version is needed to balance out the next version

Hope this helped you out and others who are reading this! )
Have a good night! (or day in western countries xD)

 

[trebla ratilla]

MAP DESCRIPTION REVIEW by CampScouter
Lol. I think this would help you, and yes, I want to review it xD

I have a suggestion to you. Maybe in your next update changelog,
-You will include the name of the hero then the ability
-Categorize them according to the update
-Add values to changes that includes numbers/integers/reals
-If you are adding a hero, include it's abilities


Example: (!These are not accurate informations!)

Spoiler: Here you Go

v. 1.1.6 changelogs:

GENERAL:

Redecorated the terrain a little bit

HEROES:

[BUFFS]

Increased [Hero Name]'s Incinerate damage from 20/30/40 to 30/40/50

Decreased cooldown of [Hero Name]'s Eye of the Storm from 15/10/5 to 10/5/2.5

Decreased cooldown of [Hero Name]'s Destruction launcher from 25/10/15 to 20/15/10

[NERFS]

Decreased [Damage, Cooldown, Damage, etc.] of [Hero Name]'s [Ability Name] from 10/20/30 to 5/10/15

NEW HERO!
(Thanks @Rheiko for this)

First Ability Here

Second Ability Here

Third Ability Here

Ultimate Ability Here

Lore

Icon
Description : ...

Icon
Description : ...

Icon link
Description : ...

Icon link
Description : ...

What is his/her lore?

BUGS/ERRORS:
(If the bug is specified)

Fixed a bug where [What happens with that bug]
(If it is a minor bug)

Fixed a minor [Trigger/Terrain/Ability/Value/Model/Icon, etc.] bug. (Note: If it is related to a hero, specify the name of the hero)
(If it is fatal bug, specified)

Fixed a fatal bug that causes [What does it do and on what particular sector in the map]
[/SPOLER]

And if you just edited the same version, maybe you can put letter on it? like if you edited v.1.1.6 on September 16,2017 and revised it today, it will look like this: v.1.1.6b

Because, revision of current version is needed to balance out the next version

Hope this helped you out and others who are reading this! )
Have a good night! (or day in western countries xD)

thank you @CampScouter and especially to @Rheiko . this is really helpful guys

 

[CampScouter]

Glad I can help

 

[nightelfbuilder]

You gotta love emma.

 

[Panda]

I love how your updating this map but, instead of doing small updates here and there just do one big update.

 

[trebla ratilla]

I love how your updating this map but, instead of doing small updates here and there just do one big update.

yeah, i decided to update more soon specially all heroes skills ( make it epic ), balance more stuff after my new update the easter bunny version of temple battle.. i think i release it on march 18, 2018. i still working on it..

Spoiler: easter bunny

-easter bunny terrain
-egg runes - increase attack speed & movement speed
-easter egg : hidden money bank : give 4500 golds, hidden strong creeps, give 400 golds when killed ( only appear when you enter the right location )
-rework model : Boss Creep ( Golem to Bunny )
-many more..

Edit: Update map description, the next version will be update soon! after i finish it . Just wait, relax and enjoy..

 

[StormKnight]

a nearly half a year (or 4-5 months ? dont remember) ago i downloaded this map and tested it, wrote down the longest comment i ever can telling things about every single hero and spell, it didnt look good in my eyes at all but i never posted that huge negative comment. i will look into it again, and all i can say until i find some time to look into all of the hero's and spells and take my time picking them apart is...

dont try to make it look like other moba's make your own moba and try to make it as fresh with new ideas that you can come up with yourself rather then trying to mimic the success of other moba's. (if that's what you want to do ofc) and as i read the comments im pretty much sure you updated a lot of stuff so this time hopefully i will write and actually post a huge positive comment instead, but i'm a bit nit picky, well actually a lot, i really hope regardless of the new update's that you would try to make your base game different with idea's that you yourself come up with, compared to what we've seen in other moba's over and over already.

best of luck to you
i will eventually get down to your map for the feedback of the hero's and abilities.

 

[trebla ratilla]

a nearly half a year (or 4-5 months ? dont remember) ago i downloaded this map and tested it, wrote down the longest comment i ever can telling things about every single hero and spell, it didnt look good in my eyes at all but i never posted that huge negative comment. i will look into it again, and all i can say until i find some time to look into all of the hero's and spells and take my time picking them apart is...

dont try to make it look like other moba's make your own moba and try to make it as fresh with new ideas that you can come up with yourself rather then trying to mimic the success of other moba's. (if that's what you want to do ofc) and as i read the comments im pretty much sure you updated a lot of stuff so this time hopefully i will write and actually post a huge positive comment instead, but i'm a bit nit picky, well actually a lot, i really hope regardless of the new update's that you would try to make your base game different with idea's that you yourself come up with, compared to what we've seen in other moba's over and over already.

best of luck to you
i will eventually get down to your map for the feedback of the hero's and abilities.

yeah, im trying to add new ideas but sometimes i lacked some ideas that's why i need more feedback. BTW, thanks for the feedback i really love it.