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20:33, 23rd Feb 2014
MiniMage: Hmm, this is interesting. But after googling for the model you used as a reference, I feel that this model needs more work to be made to look more like it. It has lots of potential though, this model.
22:48, 24th Apr 2016
HappyCockroach: It works fine, and even if it's a simple variation of the glaive thrower could be useful. But there are a few faults that need to be fixed:
- There are two white planes that look as errors at the front part of the machine. You may remove them or fix their appearance, so they aren't plain white and kinda random.
- The texture overall lacks shading, mainly the wooden part. In wc3 shading is given by the texture mostly. Try to put a darker shade of that wood texture at the side faces, so we can tell its shape better.
As an optional update, I'd recommend you to let see the front wheel better, because right now it can't be seen from the in-game view, and it tells a lot about how your machine walks, being very important to the design. (Oh, and I removed the "Creep" category, since it seems to be NE above all. If you disagree on that you can change it back)
That's it. Hope you can fix those issues. If you have any issue with it, feel free to contact me.
MiniMage: Hmm, this is interesting. But after googling for the model you used as a reference, I feel that this model needs more work to be made to look more like it. It has lots of potential though, this model.
22:48, 24th Apr 2016
HappyCockroach: It works fine, and even if it's a simple variation of the glaive thrower could be useful. But there are a few faults that need to be fixed:
- There are two white planes that look as errors at the front part of the machine. You may remove them or fix their appearance, so they aren't plain white and kinda random.
- The texture overall lacks shading, mainly the wooden part. In wc3 shading is given by the texture mostly. Try to put a darker shade of that wood texture at the side faces, so we can tell its shape better.
As an optional update, I'd recommend you to let see the front wheel better, because right now it can't be seen from the in-game view, and it tells a lot about how your machine walks, being very important to the design. (Oh, and I removed the "Creep" category, since it seems to be NE above all. If you disagree on that you can change it back)
That's it. Hope you can fix those issues. If you have any issue with it, feel free to contact me.
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