Spider Man Texture - Too Nooby?

[chilla_killa]

Hello Hive,
this is my second serious skin, but the first with not only recolour.
I realised that here at Hive, there isn't a Spider-Man model or a Spider-Man skin.
So I decided to make a skin of it, based on the Villager Man.
I worked with GIMP because I can't afford Photoshop and my Testver is over.
So here it is:

Pls comment it, but don't be too hard, I'm still learning.
Just tell me how to improve it and I will become better and better.

 

[Misha]

indeed it is too nooby try with demon hunter ^_^

 

[MasterHaosis]

Hey I like it actually! Nice work man! And unique idea!

 

[Misha]

Hey I like it actually! Nice work man! And unique idea!

MasterHaosis HAHAHAH

 

[MasterHaosis]

Oh and rep for that skin!

Misha,

 

[dansaDisco]

The black lines doesn't look good at all. To edgy and stuff D;

 

[Squidle]

The face is just a recoloring... the forhead is to bright.
And the eyes and spider-logo is... you know.

 

[Hawkwing]

The whole thing is just drawn over the original skin in a medium-high opacity. Indeed, it is too nooby. You can see the 'scales' on the legs and the same ripples in the clothing. The boots are the same, so is the face. I could go on. Also, dansaDisco is right about the lines.

 

[Sabelion]

Nice skin

 

[Elfsilver Lord]

very nooby. The black web has to follow shading and highlighting too, ya know. Its not just 100% black, you need an array of grays.

 

[Power]

cool dude, i like your skin

 

[Silverfish423]

i am not sure if that is the right model for spiderman....it just doesnt look right. however, you can fix it by of course working on the skin. try to make the eyes a little shorter. i dont know if you have noticed, but a lot of skins at first dont look like wat they are intended to be. howevr, once he skin is stretched onto the model, it will normally fill out well. that is wat you need to do. keep working on the skin until it matches the model and spiderman well.

 

[chilla_killa]

I'm actually making this skin for the Demonhunter.

 

[Silverfish423]

demon hunter eh? are you going to alpha out the blades because the war-blades do not fit with spidy, haha.

 

[chilla_killa]

Yey, sure.

 

[RaijinSpark]

it look nice but the villager animation doesn't fit spider man Scratching his head lol!