Some Nooby Terrain

[Rakdos Defiler]

first screenshot terrain map. new to terraining sorta, or atleast the kind you wanna make it look good, mainly did rpg terrain which i didn't try my best, ya know cause rpgs are usually huge maps. used weu no imports i wanna hear what u think

#1 Harbor town

#2 Custom (bad) crypt
lots of effort but horrible outcome

 

[Gilles]

Imported trees are the bomb! You should use them.

Not bad, good tile variation, and decent doodad placement. The hill in the background is flat, give it dimension. You need to use a fog, in case you don't know, it's under scenario - map options. The water doesn't match the sky and rain. It looks like a dark stormy night/day, but the water looks like it's a sunny day. Also that color of water is awful for any terrain.

 

[donut3.5]

Use more terrain variation. Also I don't like the sharp cliff in the background, as well as the lack of fog. The overall concept isn't bad, but it needs much more work.
--donut3.5--

 

[Oziris]

Not bad the hill in the background is flat fix that and add a fog plz the it will look on something.Its not bad for a first terrain.

 

[Mor)L(unE]

It doesnt really look like a harbor town, perhap syou should add a wharf or something.

 

[Rakdos Defiler]

yah i plan to start using the utm after thism found out about it after i started this lol. there is a wharf but house in middle(furthest to right) is infront of it XD. Thought of fog but didn't know how, but now i do and knowing is half the battle. what do u mean more terrain variation!? there is 6 different tiles do i need 12 in the screenshot alone? lol Thx for feedback all working on the suggestions and others still, movin slow my 3 day flu is still in effect.

 

[~Void~]

Why is it that all new terrainers make their terrain at the edge of the map? Make it in the middle...

 

[Rakdos Defiler]

It's up to the creator where they want their terrain at. The town is near edge cus all will be is just repetitive water, and behind inn and trees, all there would be is a few more trees covering the rest of the map up.

updated screenshot

 

[DungeonM]

uh shut up plz? It's up to the creator where they want their terrain at. The town is near edge cus alll will be is just repetitive water, and behind inn and trees, all there would be is a few more trees covering the rest of the map up.

i appreciate suggestions and positive comments, but not bs comments when it's 100% personaly opinionated.

updated screenshot

In that space where it would be more "repetitive water and trees" you could put something interesting. When you post your terrain here on the terrain forum you're subject to criticism. If you don't want to undergo the scorn of public opinion then don't post.

 

[Rakdos Defiler]

nvm lol, no comment

 

[Nudl9]

This isnt nooby terrain, i kinda like it actually!

 

[Kaitech[SanD]]

Best wishes for when brad.dude03 gets here...

I have an urge to restart my PC then make some terrain.

 

[Rakdos Defiler]

thanks, but its far from being expert terrain

 

[Palin_Twinblade]

The first screenshot isn't bad. Good for your first. But second.. ehhh not so good. But A for effort!
+rep

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

The first one is nice.Gives you a feeling of a little town.
The second one is not good.Not much doodads and plain...

 

[seruk]

The athmosphere on the first one is quite alright, but you can see the egde of the world and it's a bad use of the trees. I mean, they're floating.
Set the far Z way higher, the second just looks terrible with the sky cutting off half the picture.

The good tile variation and decent doodad placing is what makes both pictures bearable. Fix your camera, escpecially the Far Z, and you'll be alright.