so my terrain

[NSBaller17]

Heres my first terrain and i know its garbage so i could really use some advice.
I have a lot of cool ideas in my head, im just having some trouble putting them onto the screen. thanks!

TOok away crystal one, ya that WAS wierd
added golem meeting
tell me which one you like better

 

[Lord_Sauron]

Looks alright. Explain your ideas, then people can offer advice.

 

[NSBaller17]

I added another terrain.
well i was thinking of having one guy looking out in the distance and having a big city, or cave at the end. then right below him there is a dangerous path to get there. then my second one is just a big horde of undead envading night elves land, and a scout sees them coming

 

[Parkietje]

Hmm... crystals in NE land? Maybe try creating a dense forest, with a lot more growth. Learn to know the UTM

Also it isn't bad a a starting terrain, but needs practice. It needs good fog and try to make a good atmosphere with lightning.

And it doesn't really look like a big city ór cave in the first one. But I think when you practice a bit you can make it nice. Take a view at some people's terrain showcases and try to learn from them.

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

in the 1st pic it is nice!but one the 2nd the crystals doesn't fit at all.

 

[Gilles]

Not bad. Not a fan of Blizzard trees. And the third is better than the second.

 

[NSBaller17]

ya i thought the same thing so i used custom trees for the golems ones

 

[43berries]

Blizzard cliffs = nono

 

[NSBaller17]

lol i didnt use any bliz cliffs , the one i did user them in i took out

 

[43berries]

My apologies, but it's still rough and unnatural *inconsistent*

 

[NSBaller17]

ya i just started making terrains so im not to good at it :/

 

[Parkietje]

Hmm... they don't look very natural. And, why would golems have a table, with books?.

The only advice I can give you is practice a lot and study other people's terrains, critisize, comment them and learn from them.

 

[Nudl9]

Hmm... they don't look very natural. And, why would golems have a table, with books?.

They are reading about sexual education, to breed, to mass golems and rule the world!

 

[Parkietje]

hmmm... rock-sex

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

"Hard as a Rock" like AC/DC said.

 

[ghenjis]

Not too bad. I'm not really a fan of the fog in the second and last screens. Try making them darker.