my terrain

[son]

I come from China
Meet again,Hope You Proposal Can To improve my Terrain

China Terrain,no Popular,So I came Here

 

[sonofjay]

Nice effects dude, good work here,

I love the first and third but remove those light green grass that you put and decrease some of those spammed grass on the first pic.

 

[Dr. House]

Looks very good, yet what i notice with some of the terrains is that you used doodads which look bad compared to the entire terrain as for example the second screenshot you should remove those purple gateways *forgot the name of those* since they do not fit with everything else. As for the third screenshot now i like this one but the castle does not fit compared to everything cause his quality is to low. I must say my favorites are the first and the fourth since the first has a nice atmosphere and the fourth just has a epic sky

 

[son]

Thank instruct

 

[fladdermasken]

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...585-my-terrain-12061422030011d8080cdf2b8a.png

This is a pretty badass idea, and has the potential to be kinda kosher if you tone down the glow by a thousand or two.

Also, uncanny resemblance anyone?

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...092-my-terrain-1206240657c345b83992850cc5.png
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...-read-if-you-like-azurot-morning-crossing.png

 

[son]

Which is your work?,Very beautiful

 

[andreariona]

looks very nice. I like the lighting that you did there.

 

[RiotZ]

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...585-my-terrain-12061422030011d8080cdf2b8a.png

This is a pretty badass idea, and has the potential to be kinda kosher if you tone down the glow by a thousand or two.

Also, uncanny resemblance anyone?

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...092-my-terrain-1206240657c345b83992850cc5.png
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...-read-if-you-like-azurot-morning-crossing.png

I thought the same.

 

[Bernkastel]

As for the first picture, I'd say that you may have overdone the size of the source of light a bit. Otherwise it's pretty good in my opinion.

For the second one, as mentioned before you should remove the shimmering portals and replace them with creating portals of your own with glows and other effects. Also, the sky could be improved with throwing some cloud models here and there and changing their tones with perhaps a few glow models.

On with the third picture then. Once again as mentioned before, the quality of the castle's texture looks poor and I'd recommend to build the castle from other models. I can perhaps make and example of it tomorrow and show it to you. I also think that the color of the grass and trees is too bright, atleast the trees should be replaced with others that fit the environment better.

And then the fourth picture. You should avoid increasing the size of a model too much as it will stretch the texture, making it look ugly and with that, perhaps ruining your piece of work. The sky indeed looks good, as others have said before me. But, in my opinion it looks rather much like the end of the world and to avoid this you should probably add hills and such to the horizon, but in this case your sky might be preventing this from being done.

And on the fift picture I don't really have much more to say than what Fladdermasken already said.

Don't hesitate to ask for guidance if you feel like that.

 

[xin1432]

just a look

Fisrt one is good,the light is very comfortable.
Second,it look so hard,but you have to make good fog and others like bird,weather...
Third,I think the trees are not good with those rock.
Fourth,I see too many things here,that will make it bad.(You put too many models here..)
Fifth,just think,do you like the Big Rocks and Full Screen's water?
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[UchihaEchinox]

Good Work

 

[srtwxm]

son，Finally I find you here
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[linh]

画面不错，不过不爱这风格

 

[sonofjay]

English please.

 

[SA Dashie]

Screen is good, but do not love this style

Yeh please post in English and only English.

 

[Codric]

Nice

 

[xin1432]

Yeh please post in English and only English.

In fact we are just having a kidding (wrong grammar maybe.) with "son" ,I'm Sorry about this.