Smoking Gangster

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Sup guys, i've been working on my human anatomy lately and got my wacom tablet.
So im working on a smoking gangster. This is what i have after about an hour. Its my first human drawing done 100% from my tablet so yeah. hes going to be shaded and holding a cigarrete this is just the start.

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[Just_Spectating]

i really need a tablet..

 

[inverted]

Umm... okay? lol, any comments on my artwork.

@ everyone: updated piece added to main post

 

[donut3.5]

His armss are in pretty bad shape atm.. they lack muscle and are oddly shaped.
Also his fingers are very odd.. One bends back unnaturally.
Also add shading to the jacket and jeans to make them look more wrinkled.
--donut3.5--

 

[inverted]

yeah i realized the arms just recently, ill work on um, thx for your input

 

[Just_Spectating]

use a lapping technique.

 

[PurgeandFire]

Jacket front = highlights while frontal jean shading = shadows? Doesn't make much sense. Not too bad I guess, but I agree with donut. (Damn, I'm lazy)

 

[Just_Spectating]

you should work on ur study.

what do you have in ur human anatomy class? B-? thats what i grade this right now.

 

[ike_ike]

The proportions are kinda messed up. Also, the legs don't look like they're bent legs, but curved poles. Moar wrinkles methinks

 

[ArneXis]

The face is the only thing at the moment that looks normal.

 

[inverted]

you should work on ur study.

what do you have in ur human anatomy class? B-? thats what i grade this right now.

I dont take human anatomy class and i dont draw very often and this is the first anatomy piece i have done on my tablet. But i appriciate all your guys' input.

 

[TDR]

I dont take human anatomy class and i dont draw very often

well it's about time you should
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