Small Oasis

[madman9800]

A small forest terrain I quickly made. No imports used.

 

[VuDu]

Well maybe adding lots of grass (you almost don't have any and that's oasis) , removing some flowers and adding more plant variations also you can add little fog effect under the waterfall to look more realistic
Also in the second pic the rocks in the down side of the picture are looking little weird (floating)

 

[M0rbid]

VuDu's tipps are nice; another thing I would mention is: if you take a look at the sights of the picture, especially the first on the left side, you can see, that you rushed it to much, this looks like you've forgotten to work there!

 

[Dr. House]

i dont think the trees fit and the archways looks so weird in the terrain find a other solution for it and maybe add som fog.

 

[M0rbid]

To the archways: they look very unnatural, it's not your fault but the blizzards model's fault.
You can still work on it, by adding rocks onto the archway to give it a more natural look!

 

[VuDu]

Also in the second pic the water is like coming from nowhere if you look into the archways you can see there isn't any water there

 

[madman9800]

Oasis Updated

I listened to you guys and made a few changes.

1. I made the arches look a bit more natural.
2. I added more plant variation (shrubs/lillies/cattai)
3. Fixed some floating rocks.
4. Added fog below waterfall.

Here is the updated screenshots.

 

[VuDu]

Ok you have still 3-4 rocks to fix, remove some flowers, you didn't add the fog below the waterfall (Eerie Fog from the UTM), there are mushrooms underwater (next to the tree) and those lily pads looks unnatural.
And if I'm not mistaking use more grass and less mushrooms.

 

[M0rbid]

So I'll just give some advice to the archway, because I'm working on an archway atm, too!
What you did on the left side of the pictures looks really promising, but unfortunatelly you didn't do the same or nearly the same on the otherside of the archway, which looks a little meh!
It's overall a good improvement, so keep working. if you're interested in seeing my archway, feel free to PM me

 

[poffo]

There is too much flowers , u should do more variation about and add some fog to it look more smother , and just saying , i think the trees not fit with the theme.
But nice idea , and liked the waterfall.