Sin'dorei300's Hero Ideas

[Sin'dorei300]

Just posting some of my hero ideas.
Feel free to use 'em, just give me credits and we're okay!

Gorruk Grimblade, the Orc Warlord

Gorruk Grimblade, the Orc Warlord - STR


Brutal Strike - Unit Target
Gorruk strikes a target foe with all his force, dealing damage based on his strength and having a x% chance to cause the target bleed over x seconds.


Armor Break - Unit Target
The Warlord attempts to break a target enemy's armor, reducing target's armor by x% over x seconds and having a x% chance to do critical on next attack.


Uncontrollable Rage - No target
Gorruk enters in an uncontollable fury, increasing his attack speed and movement speed by x%, plus increasing the chance to do critical by x%, but decreasing the evasion change by x%. Lasts x seconds.


Battle Veteran - Passive
Every time Gorruk kills an enemy that is above level x, there is a x% chance to do critical on the 3 next attacks.


Titanic Charge - Point Target
The Warlord starts charging towards a target point. Enemies in the way will receive x damage and will be knocked back and allies in the way will receive a x% attack & movement speed boost over x seconds. Upon reaching the target point, Gorruk will slam the ground, doing critical, stunning and knockng back the neabry enemies.

 

[Sin'dorei300]

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[Codric]

I see, it is very interesting, but why does he have 5 hero Abilities instead of the standard 4, I know its not really a big issue but I am just wondering.
As for futher, you have three critical attacks, which does not really make sense. I get two of those three but the third one just seems unececary.
This one;

Every time Gorruk kills an enemy that is above level x, there is a x% chance to do critical on the 3 next attacks.

But then again i am not really experianced with thse skills ect.

~Codric