Short Story Contest #2

[HermanTheGibbon]

Okay, so here's one final update of mine. Just made a few changes in choice of wording and scentence structure, added a few extra bits, corrected some grammar, etc. This will be the one that I'm entering to be judged, so I hope you like it

 

[brad.dude03]

No need to put you on the list now, the contest is nearly over I just created the list to get a rough idea how many are participating.

Less than 12 hours to go!

Ephy, Myspace, let's go!!!!

 

[Teh_Ephy]

Shite! Hmm, MSBB has actually admitted that he won't be submitting his. Thanks for the encouragement, urging to finish, w/e.

 

[brad.dude03]

His choice Anyway, we have 7 hours and 15 minutes to go!

WRITE HARDER!

 

[Teh_Ephy]

Damn. Probably unable to make the deadline. Sorry.

 

[brad.dude03]

That's a shame Ephy.

Less than one hour to go. You've got 50 minutes.

IT'S ASS HAULING TIME!

 

[anetherond]

I think this is the right time to submit my final entry. I added and changed few things.
Good luck everyone!

 

[brad.dude03]

AND WE'RE DONE! Thread closed! Poll will be made tomorrow once I've had some sleep!

Thanks for all of the entries.

Sorry to you Ephy, for not making the deadline.