Sephiroth_VII / Newbwc3's ART

[Sephiroth_VII]

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Sephiroth_VII / Newbwc3's ART

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[Kimbo]

You have issues with anatomy and proportion, i highly suggest instead of copying you use them as references, that way you will learn to manipulate the shapes better and wouldn't ever need to copy again, and.....fan art isn't to good, its best you explore abit more instead of fan based objects and themes. And a tip to keep the feet balanced is to draw a grid or start off with a basic stick figure or shapes and draw from there.

 

[Sephiroth_VII]

Geez what a tough critic... not even a word of "thats pretty good" in there.

BTW: I didn't trace any of these if thats what you think.

 

[Kimbo]

Geez what a tough critic... not even a word of "thats pretty good" in there.

If you always expect praise in art then I have no idea how the hell you can improve.

 

[Deleted member 126647]

Nemesis <3

 

[Pyritie]

You have issues with anatomy and proportion

I think their anatomy is fine. I don't know what you mean. Could you point out a few parts that you don't like?

BTW these are really nice.

 

[Kimbo]

pic 1:His left upper arm is horribly disfigured by the armour pad, the arms are short and his neck is too short and far back.


2:You gave him a bented joint.
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j202/werewulf15/wallpaper_resident_evil_3_03_1024.jpg
even in that it shows the elbow is hiding(partially, due to perspective) at the back away from view but you leaned it out and gave him an extra joint.

and i honestly dislike copied work, even if it has small or slight changes (thats opinion)

 

[Sephiroth_VII]

Thats all you notice? Theres more than that... the arm is to small (the left one) compared to the right one same thing for the leg. Also the Buster Sword is bent slightly.

On the Nemesis with the Jointed arm thing..eh ..small mistake.

Look at the "Here!!" in the first post. There is alot more pics u know.

 

[Nbah]

I like how you did Raziel... He's one of my favourite characters... I think he's face needs some tweeks and there but he looks really cool! + REP

 

[Gausslander]

I liked your Warcraft 3 race concept, I think you should make more like it.

 

[Horror.Man]

I like Nemesis, only because of the color shading. There's a good balance of green in his skin, and the black and gray contrast on his suit. I don't like the Cloud drawing too much only because he's been drawn and redrawn countless times. Is FF VII the only place to get inspiring caricatures? No, but I commend you for drawing him, and taking the time to detail his clothes and armor.

Werewulf's comment was what they called, 'Constructing Criticism'. For many talented individuals, this is the hardest part for the them to accept: that through all the hard-work, detailing and shading, they still don't get the credit they wanted. You can learn from your mistakes. Never forget, the human mind is an ever-self-evolving organ.

Keep drawing, practice makes perfect.

 

[Sephiroth_VII]

I havent drawn anything much in awhile.. but heres my newest one that I liked so much I scanned it in and am going put it in a contest on TheHelper. Plz Maximize it all the way and take a look.

NightMare Creature

Hope you like it.

 

[El13urrito]

not too bad

my only suggestions are to work on anatomy and character position, especially hand structure, that's really all

i love your shading style btw

 

[Pyritie]

Lol did you even look at the image? There's no hand in it at all.

Looks very nice.

 

[El13urrito]

im talking about all the others -_-

 

[Sephiroth_VII]

I did not put a hand on the creature on purpose. I didn't see a need for it. It picks up stuff with its mouth and teeth. There arn't any hands! The rib cage works as moveable teeth and can also pick stuff up, which is cool.

I didn't know I had a specific shading style...what you mean? I just shade it like anyone else would I think.

 

[Sephiroth_VII]

O yay it won the contest!