My review
"Illidan" not "Illdan"
"lands" not "lads"
"...leader of the Naga. She..."
First Chapter
-Make a loading screen (same to all chapters)
-Recheck the grammar (same to all chapters)
-Krallen's portrait needs to be fixed
-Krallen needs more suitable abilities, icon and title
-The Pool of Tides has the building description of the orc Great Hall (same to all chapters)
-The Sea Mill cannot be built on water. It also has the description of the orc War Mill. (same to all chapters)
Second Chapter
-The mission's objectives appear during the opening cinematic
-Give suitable names for the teams rather than 'Player 1', etc...
-Fix the portraits of the Pandaren warriors
-Make Vashj stronger than Krallen. She is his commander after all
-The Pandaren ranged units are named 'Troll Headhunters' and the other unit is called 'Tauren'
-The Orb of Frost vanishes the moment we touch the Circle
-The Snap Dragons have Submerge ability even though we don't need it
-The Sirens display three abilities but can only use one. Make the other two vanish
Third Chapter
-The heroes' items do not pass from one chapter to another
-The mission's objectives appear during the opening cinematic
-Most of the Pandaren buildings have the names of Orc buildings
-We have access to two upgrades that none of our units can use
-Why in the first chapter we had upgrades in the Pool of Tides and now these same upgrades are on the Sea Mill?
-30 minutes is too long to wait for a third chapter, especially when the enemy only launches attacks occasionaly and weak attacks
Overall:
-The idea seems promissing, but I must say that the quality of the campaign is not great. Sorry if I sound too harsh
--Improve the grammar. It had so many mistakes I couldn't register all
--Improve the terrain as it is too simplistic
--Improve gameplay and the description of the missions
--Explain the plot better. Why were we arrested by the Pandaren right after we destroyed a base of the undead? Why do we need to defend our base when we could have simply escaped through the river, since all of our forces are aquatic?
--Make Krallen an actual character. Give him an actual personality rather than just being an obedient servant to Vashj
"Illidan" not "Illdan"
"lands" not "lads"
"...leader of the Naga. She..."
First Chapter
-Make a loading screen (same to all chapters)
-Recheck the grammar (same to all chapters)
-Krallen's portrait needs to be fixed
-Krallen needs more suitable abilities, icon and title
-The Pool of Tides has the building description of the orc Great Hall (same to all chapters)
-The Sea Mill cannot be built on water. It also has the description of the orc War Mill. (same to all chapters)
Second Chapter
-The mission's objectives appear during the opening cinematic
-Give suitable names for the teams rather than 'Player 1', etc...
-Fix the portraits of the Pandaren warriors
-Make Vashj stronger than Krallen. She is his commander after all
-The Pandaren ranged units are named 'Troll Headhunters' and the other unit is called 'Tauren'
-The Orb of Frost vanishes the moment we touch the Circle
-The Snap Dragons have Submerge ability even though we don't need it
-The Sirens display three abilities but can only use one. Make the other two vanish
Third Chapter
-The heroes' items do not pass from one chapter to another
-The mission's objectives appear during the opening cinematic
-Most of the Pandaren buildings have the names of Orc buildings
-We have access to two upgrades that none of our units can use
-Why in the first chapter we had upgrades in the Pool of Tides and now these same upgrades are on the Sea Mill?
-30 minutes is too long to wait for a third chapter, especially when the enemy only launches attacks occasionaly and weak attacks
Overall:
-The idea seems promissing, but I must say that the quality of the campaign is not great. Sorry if I sound too harsh
--Improve the grammar. It had so many mistakes I couldn't register all
--Improve the terrain as it is too simplistic
--Improve gameplay and the description of the missions
--Explain the plot better. Why were we arrested by the Pandaren right after we destroyed a base of the undead? Why do we need to defend our base when we could have simply escaped through the river, since all of our forces are aquatic?
--Make Krallen an actual character. Give him an actual personality rather than just being an obedient servant to Vashj
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