Predator WiP

[Deep Sea Kraken]

I am working on a predator model, and I would like some feedback on my current progress. And before anyone posts anything, I know the textre on the body blows, but I can't find anything better (and I have searched extensively) and I can't draw, otherwise I would ake it myself.

 

[ragingspeedhorn]

The head looks more like an alien head. The head of a predator remind me more of some big jamaican pothead.

 

[Deep Sea Kraken]

He has on the predator's mask

The more finished products.

This is a pic of a mask:

 

[ragingspeedhorn]

Yes, his head is more wide than yours, it is way too thin, I still think that.

 

[Deep Sea Kraken]

Here is a more updated version, I fixed the wrap on his chest and legs.

 

[TDR]

I think you should also edit the hair, make it wider and a little shorter, since the predator had like dreadlocks or something, not a ponytail.

 

[Deep Sea Kraken]

Ill take the ponytail thing off the top, and see what I can do about the longer hair, because predators have rather long hair.

 

[Dionesiist]

Also, try throwing in some alpha on the hair, it'll look better that way.

 

[Deep Sea Kraken]

You mean making his hair kind of transparent?

 

[Dionesiist]

Make it look less like a sheet with a pattern on it. Separate the dreadlocks around.

 

[Infinitynexus]

Hrm, that texture looks more like a picture of some sort instead of actually making ur own damn stuff..

 

[Dionesiist]

It is a photo.
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[Deep Sea Kraken]

I WOULD make my own stuff, and I have tried, and trust me, if I used it, I would never be able to show my face on the hive again (it sucks that much)