Please teach me to improve this market

[Pech_RF]

Please tell me how can I improve this market.

http://upic.me/show/44891558


I really want to be a good terrainer.

 

[GreeN!X]

Your image doesn't work.

 

[Pech_RF]

Hera_ oh thanks I don't know where can I upload my picture, please tell me.

 

[Xonok]

It did work for me.

In any case, just attach images to your post.

 

[GreeN!X]

That's already pretty great if the player would view it in that camera. Though tiles are a bit messy.

BTW, askin' here. Are you gonna use that as a playable map or just some scenic sort of terrain?

EDIT:
There's a bbcode link below your pic, you could just copy and paste that into your post.

Like this:

but make sure you paste it in a hidden tag ([ hidden=][/hidden])

 

[Pech_RF]

to Hera_
This map is in my campaign This is really playable map.

to Xonok I'm new here. I don't understand your post clearly.

 

[GreeN!X]

If this is playable then it's really good.
If you're gonna use a camera angle like that then I think it's good enough. It's already a lot better than what 90% of newbies here do.

I really don't know if this is viewed in the normal game camera though.

 

[Pech_RF]

I'm not sure about camera angle but I will do my best.

 

[Strydhaizer]

The white marble tile dont fit at the center of dark tiles
Second , the dark fences , i guess , also dont fit the terrain
Third . Its better if you replace the Swordsman to Villager
Fourth . i dont think i need to suggest a fog but its good enough

Other part of the terrain are nice . Keep making terrains , it will improve your skills

Are you using UTM or you just made your own terrain. Try using it It will really improve your terrain.

 

[Xonok]

When replying you have a button at the lower part of the page. It says "Manage Attachments".
In there you can upload an attachment and then come back and use one of the buttons place it in your post. Those attachments that are not placed in the post will simply be listed after it.
This can only be done in advanced mode.

 

[Pech_RF]

To Stryderzero :
Your post is very useful to me.
I'll improve it as much as posible.
Thank you very much.

 

[Pech_RF]

Thank you Xonok.

 

[Binsu]

To give a feedback: Your terrain looks good! I suggest workin in UTM and maybe you can enhanced the skies now and give a proper fog to this.

Here are some tutorials on enhancing skies:

Enchancing Skies

For putting a fog, go to Scenario, then Map Options and check Use Terrain Fog. Now go pick the color you want and configure the Z Start and End. It depends on the Z Start and End and Density on how your fog will show.

Now to put some feedbacks to your terrain, your terrain nce again is good. But I did noticed that the way you mix the tiles are quite messed up. Remove the White Marble, it makes your other tiles messy when you mixed this with the others. Also change those Black fence to the normal one or find a custom resource here that fits. Because Black Fences quite crushes the mood of the terrain.

 

[Strydhaizer]

Those black fences are for Underground only (I think)

About the sky being told by HM , you need a cloudsphere for it , download the UTM ^_^

 

[Pech_RF]

to Hell_Master :
Thanks for the tutorial and feedback there're very useful.

to Stryderzero :
Thanks for the comment, I'll find better fences.

 

[Binsu]

No problem, I love your way of terraining. Keep it up!