Orcish Survival v0.01

[Moderator]

13:10, 29th Aug 2010
Cweener: Rejected
this map does not meet the minimum quality to be approved.
For more info, you can see these posts.
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#6

 

[nKnight]

I hope..

 

[Hawk]

One question: how old are you ?

 

[nKnight]

14 years old

 

[bounty hunter2]

Orcish Survival v0.01 Review

Orcish Survival v0.01 is a Defense type of map made by nKnight.

The map is a horrid one indeed. Sorry for being quite direct, as I see you are only fourteen years old, but this map is just plain bad. Now why?

The terrain is only hundreds of trees, but literally hundreds, placed around. And don't use blizzard cliffs, unless you can find a very good use to them, since they look very ugly. Using them good is very hard and you haven't achieved it.

The object editor work is very bad aswell, there are a lot of missing btn icons so it just shows green. Really a lot. The heroes have regular spells as well, nothing even close to being original.

The entire map concept is seen a million times before, and the way you made the map doesn't make the concept a slight bit interesting. What can you do? Read tutorials on mapping, make more maps, share them on the development forum. This will never get approved I'm afraid, no matter the changes you make. Practice, read etc.

 

[knight26]

I just lol'ed.
Automatic thumb down from me, after reading that and description.
Your english skills are poor (what the fuck is "hear an orc tradition nearby") and i can scrape together that you have yet to enter puberty from the description. Your brain power is quite low imo

And your ass-holeness powers are quite high imo.. perhaps TOO high.
I think imma report u for flaming on him.
than again, your not worth it, i mean look at you, flaming a kid cos hes 14, and yet u write like u're 12..

Sorry i had to pop-in everyone.

Ontopic:
I think bounty_hunter2 put it together quite well,
Though for the description I'd like to show u some links of some good description maps:
Wrath of Kael -by Vengeancekael
The last stand - by Vengeancekael
(i just like his way of description).

And here are the BB-codes that u use to create a good description

 

[Vengeancekael]

I just lol'ed.
Automatic thumb down from me, after reading that and description.
Your english skills are poor (what the fuck is "hear an orc tradition nearby") and i can scrape together that you have yet to enter puberty from the description. Your brain power is quite low imo

Excuse me? Not everyone who is 14 years old is terrible at map making. I myself am 14 and I have made several good maps.

 

[Hawk]

Excuse me? Not everyone who is 14 years old is terrible at map making. I myself am 14 and I have made several good maps.

True.

 

[bounty hunter2]

I just lol'ed.
Automatic thumb down from me, after reading that and description.
Your english skills are poor (what the fuck is "hear an orc tradition nearby") and i can scrape together that you have yet to enter puberty from the description. Your brain power is quite low imo

Don't be judgmental by the age of someone. And don't insult others. Maybe English isn't his first language, he is at least abiding the rules.

 

[FrostScythe]

Im Only 12 and i make Maps. I just hope there ok But yet somebody can help me by giving me advice