OrcAssassine

[Moderator]

21:12, 31st Mar 2009
Dan van Ohllus:
There are two things you need to fix before I'll approve this model.
- Her portrait talk animation is set to non-looping. Please uncheck it so that the animation loops when she talks.
- Change the model's headername to something else than Demoness. Can be fixed in Magos Model Editor if you click the "Edit" button and choose "Model Properties".

EDIT: Changes made, approved. Will be useful for the orchish race.

 

[Leeroy]

Teh.sexy.

Really not bad for a first model, the Uv-map is decent enough. Can't test it right now, but I guess anims are ok too. I give it a 4 being the first model.

 

[Traxamillion]

It could do without the horns.

 

[Jack_Sparrow93]

Pretty nice, but it got only 1 attack animation and that one looks quite wierd. Add some more!

And a very big background in the portrait, dunno if it makes any difference with the size...

But still good for being the first model, I couldn't have done better

 

[Misha]

Hmm...

waist fix needed, make it a bit thinner and ret rid of those... ridges oO

fix crotch area, it doesn't have to be that extruded

MOST certainly fix the butt! because it doesn't fit with the legs and viceversa

remove horns

do better the skin or use default orc, or find some here on Hive

death anim is hillarious xD get another one because this smells like hentai ~.~

yap, find other dissipate anim too :3

Move portrait camera into slight frog perspective for better view :3
err.... ponytail hair maybe? Would look better...

rating: 2.45/5 Good, but needs work

~Misha~

 

[infrenus]

Err... in the death animation some strange movement in her pelvis...

 

[Tauer]

It's pretty good for a first model, but could use some work. Mainly the horns, and like some people said the death anim. Just keep making them and you'll get better. Practise makes perfect.
3 - 4/5 for being your first model

 

[Misha]

you still have a lot of work on this one friend =[

 

[Malcous]

Not bad. 3.5/5

 

[Leeroy]

The death anim. Is she transexual?

Here are my bug reports:

-The stand 3 is strange, go check it by yourself to understand what I mean.
-The death anim looks...uh. Strange.

I don'r like much the mesh at the chest, that made her looks anorexical, as my opinion.

 

[Misha]

possibly not aprovable by mods untill you fix kinks i pointed. =/

 

[Ryuthedragon]

bad model =\

You can do something better i think ....

 

[Mechanical Man]

You can do something better i think ....

I think yes, he can.

 

[Tauer]

Hehe, it looks like she gets a boner in the death anim.
I'd recommend simply transferring a whole new death & dissipate animation. Just keep looking until you find one that fits and doesn't give her a penis.

 

[Misha]

Ghh a faulty or weird animation and suddenly everyone goes into hentai @.@

i'm sure the creator didn't had your weird posts in mind =/

dude please fix that if you don't want more of the weirdness =S

 

[Tauer]

Hahaha

 

[SILLYbear]

hair part can use some ++ing, including the horns. but a good model (esp as a starting one)

 

[thefray]

OMG i luv the death anim. hehe

 

[Misha]

..... should i request thread closure? oO

~Misha~

 

[OmniBugger]

Hey you could scale down those horns and put them at the mouth as tusks then it would look like a real orc. The death anim really made me lol. 3/5

 

[Tauer]

..... should i request thread closure? oO

~Misha~

Why would you do that?

 

[OmniBugger]

Too many people talk bout the death anim thing

 

[Radagast]

you could use ingame textures

 

[Tauer]

Too many people talk bout the death anim thing

So? It's a problem isn't it? I can't see why we shouldn't talk about the death anim... I swear to god, sometimes I don't understand what people's problems are. Just because we talk about a faulty death anim and make jokes about it doesn't mean that the thread should be locked. Jeez.

 

[Devine]

oh yes.
very mature.
If you wouldn't be able to fix this, You know where to find me.

 

[Misha]

So? It's a problem isn't it? I can't see why we shouldn't talk about the death anim... I swear to god, sometimes I don't understand what people's problems are. Just because we talk about a faulty death anim and make jokes about it doesn't mean that the thread should be locked. Jeez.

lol it just turns weird when too many people point the same thing

lol i still remember the demon model thread with a missin' **** xD

i for one have no problem with the lulzy part xD

~Misha~

 

[Alfredo]

Eerrr....
Am I the only one who tested this Model INGAME?

There is one more thing MUCH MORE ANNOYING than the texture or the death-anim:
While performing Stand - 4 animation the Model splashes green blood on the ground and you hear the dying sound from a Nightelf Archer.

I'd love to use this model in my map, but this is just ANNOYING AS HELL!!!
Pleeeeeeeeee...eeese fix it or someone else who has more experiancein modelling fix it.

Besides of that this is the best female Orc-Hero model on this whole Site...

P.S.: The death-anim is originally taken from the DemonHunter, so blame Blizzard for makin' it look so strange; I personally like it.

 

[Tauer]

If Linaze wants it, I could try to fix those problems?

 

[Misha]

Eerrr....
Am I the only one who tested this Model INGAME?

There is one more thing MUCH MORE ANNOYING than the texture or the death-anim:
While performing Stand - 4 animation the Model splashes green blood on the ground and you hear the dying sound from a Nightelf Archer.

I'd love to use this model in my map, but this is just ANNOYING AS HELL!!!
Pleeeeeeeeee...eeese fix it or someone else who has more experiancein modelling fix it.

Besides of that this is the best female Orc-Hero model on this whole Site...

P.S.: The death-anim is originally taken from the DemonHunter, so blame Blizzard for makin' it look so strange; I personally like it.

nope i tested it too... i just didn't want to bombard the guy x3

If Linaze wants it, I could try to fix those problems?

lol....

 

[Alfredo]

If Linaze wants it, I could try to fix those problems?

Then ask him...

 

[Linaze]

*Model updated* (Thanks to Tauer for helping me out).
-Removed horns.
-Fix so the but and legs fit together more nicely.
-New death/dissipate animations.
-The stand 4 animation bug FIXED.
-Added a mask.

Please report any bugs or anything you find, thanks.

 

[Misha]

*Model updated* (Thanks to Tauer for helping me out).
-Removed horns.
-Fix so the but and legs fit together more nicely.
-New death/dissipate animations.
-The stand 4 animation bug FIXED.
-Added a mask.

Please report any bugs or anything you find, thanks.

she stil has that "butt" problem lol...

 

[Linaze]

It's not nearly as bad as before, that's for sure. It's hardly even noticeable in game anymore, so I don't think it's that big a deal.
Anything else?

 

[Misha]

hmm look at texture that shows with that problem... is there a way to UV that so it dissapers completly?

 

[Tauer]

I can't see any problems with her butt?

 

[Alfredo]

Yay!!! Updated!!!
That was quick.
Thanks alot for improving this model, though i don't like the mask...

But anyway a quite good model!

 

[Lambsauce]

Hehe brings back memo's, It wansnt easy to see what she looked like at the time, She had frizzy black hair and spoke like a grunt ;D and wore a brown robe with no detail, Ill post a screenie ;p, however i think the model looks alrite

ah lol here you go

 

[Misha]

I can't see any problems with her butt?

and i see.... and untill this is fixed it stays "pending" 8)

 

[Linaze]

Then pending it shall stay. Because I don't see it as a big problem, nor can I fix it any better.

 

[Jack_Sparrow93]

I think it looks much better after your update, but I agree with Misha

 

[Linaze]

Well, thank you.
I still can't see how her butt is that much of a problem since I made it nearly invisible compared to what it was like before.

 

[Bregottfabriken]

I wasn't here so see how is was before you updated it, but from what ive seen from artwork it looks great

 

[Linaze]

Updated once more, this time I added team color to her bra and panties, since she had very little team color before.

 

[Misha]

the problem is still present..

However... this time i am willing to grant my aproval on it, because i've tried myself to fix it, but to no avail lol...

exellent job so far.

3.89/5

~Misha~

 

[Tauer]

I think it's very awesome, and definately worthy of approval.

4/5

 

[MasterHaosis]

Linaze,
That is one cool model! 5/5 and rep for you!
I expect fel orc version! (with succubus skin)

 

[Tha_Wc3_Map_Maker]

dude i think we all know that you could do better, but yea still good work ^^

 

[Piwlady]

kinda blurry stripper i say...

 

[n-Gage]

Freaking awesome \m/>_<\m/