Opinions, my 'spell making skill'

[Angelusz]

hey guys, i felt like giving spells a try, and so i started making something that i felt to be a useful spell. this is what came out of it:

http://www.wc3sear.ch/?p=Spells&ID=694

I'd like to know what you guys think of it, do i have potential in this? ^^ It's trigger enhanced, so not multi-instance. I just want to know what you guys think.
Thanks!

 

[Daelin]

Hmm... If it is what I think it is it doesn't sound really cool. It's just an autocastable spell which strikes all the units around the caster with lightnings. Oh well, this sounds like a simple moonson which only one strike. And if you did it for that auto-castable stuff don't bother. It's very lame already...

 

[Angelusz]

alright, well, at least i can say i tried ^^ now, i'm gonna try... models! yeah

Btw, it's not what you think it is.

Its a spell fired on an enemy. When done, the enemy gets hit by lightning strikes, all the ones around him too, yes, but it follows the enemy, where the enemy goes, the lightning strikes go. for 10 seconds, and cmon, don't be so hard on me, it's my first attempt to a real trigger enhanced spell

 

[Daelin]

Hmm... if you say it is your first trigger attempt... Ok. But I've seen you putting a lot of questions around here so I didn't know that you hadn't finished any by now.

 

[Angelusz]

oh i've helped here and there, with parts of spells.
I never said i'm not good at triggers, it's just my first attempt to make one myself. And from my own point of view, i've seen alot worse.

 

[Daelin]

That is correct... There are non triggered spells which have almost nothing cool... Oh well, enough talking before seeing it. I'll check it right away...